New Due South Fic for ds_northernnews

Oct 10, 2007 11:51

Summary - It's hard to say 'I love you, freak' with 2000 miles in between.
Challenge - ds_northernnews prompt 28. Phone, internet service restored in N.W.T. communities.
Pairing - Kowalski/Fraser.
Rating - R.
Length - 7565 words.
Disclaimer - Not mine. Sadly never will be.
Thanks - and love to aukestrel for beta services, some cracking lines, the online names and being a ( Read more... )

challenges, fic, due south

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grey853 October 10 2007, 12:40:05 UTC
I adore this! I loved how Fraser's correcting Ray's grammar when Ray's trying to pour his heart out. That's so Fraser.

Plus, I'm a big fan of the Fraser's clueless kind of story and when Ray think's he's been spurned, well, he can more stubborn than a pitbull with a bone about cutting someone out of his life. Thank god Fraser had enough sense to come to Chicago.

Loved it!!! I was smiling all the way through.

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bertybertle October 11 2007, 05:19:45 UTC
Thank you so much, Grey.

I love Fraser's corrections too - and the way Ray usually just accepts them with good grace.

Glad it made you smile.

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peoriapeoria September 26 2010, 15:11:56 UTC
When Fraser is restraining himself from doing it, Ray's got the Fraser in his head, or at least that part of himself that wants to please Fraser in his head, looking for the right one. Love that.

Like he knows he got it wrong (because Fraser took the time, possibly unlike his teachers once upon) and he wants to make Fraser happy, wants to look his best.

You know Fraser knows he's gotten through because he gives Ray the correction and doesn't require him to dig.

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bertybertle September 26 2010, 17:55:22 UTC
Ray knows this stuff - he just needs to get it all out in a hurry and makes mistakes sometimes. I loved that episode when Fraser, over the top of the GTO, compliments Ray on a "beautifully constructed sentence" or something like that and Ray just thanks him. I was totally thinking of that scene when I wrote this. :-)

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akamine_chan October 10 2007, 13:25:44 UTC
I loved Ray waking up with "Canada!"

I loved the fact that they were both clueless, and how stubborn they both were. I loved Fraser unpacking and sleeping on a bedroll next to Ray's bed.

I loved everything about this story. What a great way to start my morning! Thanks.

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bertybertle October 11 2007, 05:21:27 UTC
Thank you kindly. I'm so pleased it gave you a happy start to the day. *hug*

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akite October 10 2007, 17:10:13 UTC
♥ Though, I got a bit peeved with Ray for ignoring Fraser's messages. *smacks him in the head*

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bertybertle October 11 2007, 05:22:40 UTC
*passes you a bat so you can hit him harder*

Thank you so much. :-)

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lamentables October 10 2007, 17:56:25 UTC
“Canada!”

Oh Ray *sighgigglesigh*

I enjoyed that, despite wanting to kick Ray in the head :)

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bertybertle October 11 2007, 05:24:07 UTC
I know! It makes your teeth grind, doesn't it? *grins sheepishly*

Thanks for reading.

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aukestrel October 10 2007, 22:02:40 UTC
HEE! Guess what? I bought purple-ink pens the other day in honour of Frannie. *g*

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bertybertle October 11 2007, 05:25:42 UTC
Ha! Seriously? Purple? *snorts* Isn't that, like, reaaaaaally girly? *g*

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aukestrel October 11 2007, 12:21:59 UTC
If you tell anyone I shall have to deny it utterly. (But really? They're so FUN! My daughter is enchanted!)

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aukestrel October 11 2007, 12:24:02 UTC
If you tell anyone I shall have to deny it utterly. (But really? They're so FUN! My daughter is enchanted!)

{that was me}

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