Slightly late birthday fic for missapocalyptic

May 15, 2006 21:53

Here's a little belated birthday fic for missapocalyptic - sorry, Hon! If I start writing now, maybe I can get next year's one in on time ( Read more... )

slash, fraser, kowalski, due south

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missapocalyptic May 15 2006, 22:44:18 UTC
I already told you to stop apologizing, didn't I? And if one of us is as angel it's you. Thank you so much for this *adds to memories*. If I start quoting my favourite lines now I'll probably never stop - but I have to do one or two of them at least:

Ray thinks he can hear glaciers creaking somewhere in the sound of that voice. ... For one second, Ray endures the up close intensity of Benton Fraser’s displeasure Mhhh, I love this.

And then:
“What? What must I know, Frase?” Ray’s tone isn’t harsh, but nor is it gentle. He sounds honestly perplexed. “That you watch me all the time? That you touch me when you don’t need to? That you don’t leave straight away when you say goodbye? That what I’m supposed to know? Cos I do know that. I do. But the question is, do I know what that means ( ... )

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missapocalyptic May 15 2006, 22:46:00 UTC
"If one of us is an angel" and "in it's very own way", I wanted to say. *tries to put brain back into head*

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bertybertle May 16 2006, 08:36:52 UTC
*shrieks with giggles* Ladies and Gentlemen, I give you my beta - Missy A.

*helps with putting brain in head thing*

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bertybertle May 16 2006, 08:35:11 UTC
Squuuuuuuueeeeeeeeeeeeee! I'm so glad you liked it! Sorry I didn't get your whole wish list in. I'll try and stick the others in future fics! Hehehehehe!

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grey853 May 15 2006, 22:45:27 UTC
Very nice. I love a pissy/jealous Fraser.

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bertybertle May 16 2006, 08:38:30 UTC
Me too! The boy has such a pretty frown. Glad you enjoyed. :-)

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ulthyrja May 15 2006, 23:17:06 UTC
This is really good and intense! Loved the whole tension between Ray and Fraser, Ray demanding a resolution and the unbearable hotness of it all. Great job on the details, too!!!

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bertybertle May 16 2006, 08:41:22 UTC
Well, thank you very much. A little angst is always a good thing.

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malnpudl May 16 2006, 02:58:08 UTC
Jealous/possessive Fraser is a very hot thing indeed. Tasty. :-)

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bertybertle May 16 2006, 08:44:01 UTC
Yes indeedy! In fact Fraser showing any kind of strong emotion is a thing of beauty. Thanks for the comments. :-)

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sam80853 May 16 2006, 13:47:38 UTC
Guh ... nice birthday present! And very clever of missapocalypic to wish for something like this.

“No. You’re right. But I didn’t mean to make you so…you know… well, mad.”

Fraser’s eyes open a little, shining darkly. “Yeah. You did.”

Guhhhhhhhhh...

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bertybertle May 16 2006, 15:48:31 UTC
Oooooh! I got a "guhhhhhhh"! I can go to bed happy then! Hehehehehe! Thanks for the feedback! :-)

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