[Fanfic] TFHOL 19/19

[berseker]

Title: The Flying Heart of Love 19/19
Rating: Pgish, sort of. Maybe not.
Characters: Lots of characters in this chapter.
Warnings: This is an AU, so you'll have to ignore everything you know about family relations and things from what passes for canon at Latin Hetalia. I MEAN IT. BE WARNED.

As always, thanks to Zu for reading it over for me <3

Comments

[vicucha_sc]

Aww Martin was so sweet towards the end <3333
The part where Antonio and Lovina reunited was SO telenovela LOL

[berseker]

His loving heart showed itself... Lulu should treasure that and enjoy it, right? owo

Hehehe I wanted it to be dramatic... imagine a super loud romantic song playing in the background, for full effect.

Thank you for reading and commenting, darling, your comments encouraged me a lot to keep going! ♥

[tomoyo_san]

OMG, OMG sorry for no comment before. But I've just had finished reading your history. It was totally awesome !!!!! I love it, Iove it very much!!! I'm still laughing for all the stuff of Migue an Manu and of course of Lu and Tincho.... Thanks thanks for this amazing history the best I've ever read :)

[berseker]

Eeeeh thank you! ♥ I'm so glad you liked it, this one took so long to finish omg. I can't even believe it.

Aaaw thank you for your comment, that makes me so, so happy. /HUGS

Nooooooo what'll we do now without our novela?

[oxiosa]

I forgot to say it in the last chapters, but I love how you wrote Feliciana much more… brighter than usually portrayed (don’t get me wrong, I’ve read works with happy-go-lucky Feliciana before, and she that was utterly adorable and lovable, but I like this Feli better, since Himaruya’s Nyo!Italy looked much more sharper and serious than Feliciano). I think it fits her.

Awww Martín kept his promise even if he didn’t have to, I’m so proud of you baby, you’re such and honorable man and so in love heheheee. You’ll hate me forever, but can I just point out that MARADONA SAVED LUCIANO’S LIFE? What, it obviously was the promise of being compared to him what made Luciano wake up, ok, everybody knows he wanted to hear that so badly he had to snap out of that ugly coma/SHOT.

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay everybody got a happy ending, even Maddie and Alicia! Well, kind of, Luci's part made me kind of sad :( Btw I loved Martín’s train of thoughts there. “You sad, my love? Here, have praises, kittens and sex.”

<3<3<3<3

[berseker]

OMG I can't even believe it's over

Thank you, I'm glad you liked that! I tried to make them a bit like their male counterparts (like grumpy Lovina, heh), but making them... well, Feli and Lovi. So I appreciate that ♥

... and now I'm picturing Martín thinking of that and sitting on the bed and waking up Lulu to tell him he should thank Maradona, lol. Luci will sulk for days. But yes, in the end, LOVE TRIUMPHED, even over Tincho's enormous pride :D

Aaw but Tincho won't let him mope for long. He's still fretting over his career, but now he has the coolest boyfriend who will make him happy no matter what. With the power of kitties. everyone should have a Martin to cheer them up on a sad day, honestly

thank you so much for commenting, sweetie, love you :*