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Lalala

Jan 14, 2012 20:03

Title: Lalala
Author: berryblue_girl
Rating: PG
Genre/Warnings: AU, Angst
Summary: The Hawaiian heat wasn't what was causing Danny to burn.
Disclaimer: I don't own the show or McDanno. *sadface*
Author's Notes: This was inspired by another Pon and Zi comic and the "I Want to Hold Your Hand" scene from Across the Universe. Feedback is adored and petted!

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character: danny williams, fanfiction, character: meka hanamoa, category: gen, character: catherine rollins, fandom: hawaii five-0, rating: pg

Comments 9

huntress69 January 15 2012, 03:37:56 UTC

This is lovely and I so thank you for sharing it. And I so love this description of Steve: He could brighten a room just by entering it. It was like he was made of sunshine and warmth.

berryblue_girl January 15 2012, 04:10:18 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked the story. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Peace, Love, and Happiness to You...Sarah

qixy January 15 2012, 04:41:46 UTC

oh poor danny,love the angst.
Could there be more?please?

berryblue_girl January 15 2012, 04:50:58 UTC

I know, I just want to cuddle him. As for another, I don't know. I suppose it would all depend on whether I could find a comic that could inspire something. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Peace, Love, and Happiness to You...Sarah

jazzybabe56 January 15 2012, 13:56:41 UTC

ahh poor Danny - to be in love with forbidden fruit must be so difficult -- especially at that age.....

:(

berryblue_girl January 15 2012, 18:26:30 UTC

I know! That's what I wanted to get across in the story. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Peace, Love, and Happiness to You...Sarah

kitmerlot1213 January 15 2012, 14:25:38 UTC

Oh man, I hope you are planning on continuing this because the angst is killing me--in a good way :):)

I could just shake Danny's parents for making him feel ashamed of who he is and I hope they feel ashamed of how they treated him.

Great work on this AU.

berryblue_girl January 15 2012, 18:29:15 UTC

Yeah, I hated making Danny's parents like that, but sometimes, that happens to kids. As for continuing, like I told another reviewer, it would depend on whether I could find a P&Z comic that would inspire me. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Peace, Love, and Happiness to You...Sarah

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berryblue_girl January 20 2012, 17:29:25 UTC

I know, Danno is angstin' hard in this ficlet. Thank you for r&ring.

Peace, Love, and Happiness to You...Sarah