A rough draft for you all. It probably moves too fast near the finale, but I was under a time crunch. Any feedback would be wonderful, both good and bad. Don't worry about my feelings. (this time).
i would like to imagine that random girl on the street of Paris is me...i like the story tho....we havnt gottent to short stories yet in writing, so i dont know that im expert enought to offer enough constructive critisim.
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