Fic - Numb3rs/SGA; A Story Just Begun

[bergann]

Title: A Story Just Begun
Author: bergann
Fandom: Numb3rs/Stargate Atlantis
Pairing: Colby Granger/Evan Lorne
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 3 930
Summary: "What, so you don't think it's weird that 150 people are all saying there's some mysteriously mostly invisible city hidden in the San Francisco Bay?"
Author’s Note: for clwilson2006, who bought me in the Sweet Charity

Comments

[lilacs_roses]

Damn!!! You can't leave it there! Not wanting to spoil it, I'll just say that I loved it and I want more!!! :)

[bergann]

Thank you, and sadly I had to leave it there or miss my deadline, which I considered far worse ;)

[clwilson2006]

*squeal*
Utter utter LOVE!!!!
You did not just do that to me..... the ending!!! OMG!!!!!
I have no words, just an urge to abuse exclamation points!!
This is worth so much more than I actually paid for it.
Here have my first-born. (no seriously, take her, she's just discovered boys, I can't handle it.)

[lilacs_roses]

"Here have my first-born. (no seriously, take her, she's just discovered boys, I can't handle it.)"

ROFLMBO!! Man.... my son's only 6 but I've been telling myself since he was born that I'll have to carry a baseball bat around with me.

Good luck.

[bergann]

I'm so glad you liked it! And as for the ending, I can only apologize -- I fully intended for this to be fully-fledged, but then I decided to start from scratch last week and time suddenly became in very short supply.

I'm not sure leaving your first born with me would be a great idea, and it'd probably involve too much paperwork for my liking :P

[bergann]

Thank you so much!

[sexycazzy]

Even though I haven't seen an episode of Numbers, I still loved this little fic esp. with cute & sexy Lorne! :)

And I have to agree with the commenters above me - you can't end it with that! I really want to see how Cobly react to the city of Atlantis!

I still remember my first sight of the city (on the tv, I mean!) and it was breath-taking! :)

[bergann]

Thank you so much! I totally don't intend to end it with that, but there is a sequel coming! Promise!

[rubygirl29]

Cool! Colby has the gene!!! This was so sweet. I really liked the ease of their relationship despite all the stresses and secrecy they have to keep

I haven't written a Colby/Lorne in ages. I think I might have to fill one of my squares on my hc_bingo card with one.

[bergann]

Thank you!

I totally support this idea. (By which I mean do it do it do it do it!).