Comments | beren_writes: Fic: Shadow Dwellers

beren_writes

Fic: Shadow Dwellers - PG (no pairing) 01/02

Feb 17, 2005 10:30

Okay, I have no idea what overcame me, but I have written a fic with no pairing - not even a hint of man sex! :) I must be suffering from something ::g::.

Title: Shadow Dwellers
Chapter: Nightmares 01/02
Parts: Chapter 1 | Chapter 2
Author: Beren
Pairing: none
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and ( Read more... )

ch_story: shadow dwellers, pairing: none, fandom: harry potter, fictype: 10-30kwds, fictype: chaptered, rating: g to pg13, type: fiction, category: gen

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beren_writes February 18 2005, 08:45:56 UTC

Thank you. Gen bunnies are unusual creatures; I've never had one for HP before, but it was actually rather fun to write. I think my subconsious kept expecting Draco to come round a corner at any moment and ravish Harry, or at least for Remus to jump Sirius, but it never happened :).

dihall February 18 2005, 03:29:33 UTC

Amazing - what a great and creative way of bringing Sirius back - looking forward to the next chapter. You talented writer!

beren_writes February 18 2005, 08:47:03 UTC

Thank you, very pleased you liked it. This one bit me one night and wouldn't let go. At first there was just the darkness and then the Shadow Dwellers leapt into life and suddenly became rather important :).

yanagi_wa February 18 2005, 04:52:10 UTC

Waaa! I don't think I've read a better HP fic in a long time. Everything was developed perfectly. Must read more. .. *scurries to next chapter.*

beren_writes February 18 2005, 08:47:23 UTC

Thank you so much, I do hope you like the end.

dacro February 18 2005, 07:43:00 UTC

Glancing in the mirror he wondered absently if he had died and just not realised it, after all he was a wizard and Binns had not noticed.
Powerful moment. I love Harry's thought process.

Even as the water splashed off his back and through the opening onto Aunt Petunia's immaculate floor he began to fall.
This image still haunts me. Wow.

Loved this. I had to wait to read it, and it drove me insane!!! I wanted to read it at school, but I ran out of time.

You always manage to come up with such creative and original ideas. *hugs* Off to ch 2!

beren_writes February 18 2005, 08:50:31 UTC

Thank you *smooches*; I do like to make Harry suffer, don't I :)

You always pick out the most intersting bits to comment on. I'm very pleased you liked the transitional moment.

I do hope you like the second half as well *hugs*, oh, and sorry for being party to driving you insane ;). I find it's much easier to stay insane most of the time and only emply sanity in emergencies ::g::.

dacro February 19 2005, 00:23:32 UTC

You always pick out the most intersting bits to comment on.

heh. Well, I always figure writers have enough people squeeing, (not that I don't do a lot of that too. heh) so I try to pick out the parts that make me go "Damn! that's a great line! Damn her for thinking of it first!" :D

Well, if I'm going to go insane, it's nice to have a freiend in the driver's seat! heh. I always gladly follow the ones I trust.

(I still love your Pomfrey with all my heart)

The second part was great too. I had to put myself to bed before finishing it, but this morning...what a treat to wake up to.

lady_addiction February 18 2005, 08:07:05 UTC

You're so prolific! *sighs in envy*

Hope you don't mind if I friend you! ^_^

beren_writes February 18 2005, 08:51:03 UTC

Not at all, I've friended you back. Thank you.