Comments | beren_writes: Fic: Be Like You 02/02, Bill/Gustav, NC17/18

beren_writes

Fic: Be Like You 02/02, Bill/Gustav, NC17/18

Apr 11, 2007 07:48

Title: Be Like You (Das Geschenk (The Gift) Series II) 02/02
Link: To Part 01/02
Series: Das Geschenk (The Gift) Series - section listing
Author: Beren
Fandom: Tokio Hotel / Jrock RPS (mentioned)
Pairing: Bill/Gustav, Bill/Gackt (mentioned)
Rating: NC-17/18 for sex and language
Warnings: vampires
Summary: Tom has decided he wants to be a vampire ( Read more... )

series: das geschenk, rating: r to nc17, category: slash, fandom: jrock, fictype: 10-30kwds, pairing: xo - bill/gackt, ch_story: be like you, genre: vampires, fictype: chaptered, fandom: tokio hotel, pairing: th - bill/gustav, person: gackt

Comments 24

6why_me9 April 11 2007, 16:47:17 UTC

Woohoo! God, I love this series! Bill and Tom being vampires is just so freakin hot. I don't think anything could top that.

About the no-twincest and three-people-in-one-bed-could-be-managable-thing:
Couldn't Tom and Bill at least decide to seduce someone (male) together or something? Anything?*puppydogeyes*

Anyway...I can't wait for the next part!

beren_writes April 11 2007, 19:14:51 UTC

Thank you :). I rather like Bill and Tom as vamps as well, but then I like just about any pretty boys as vamps :). One track? Moi? Nah ;).

The twincest angle just doesn't kick my muse in this one ... it does in some others I'm writing though ::g::. And the three in a bed ... writing that too, just not in the vamps universe ;).

dead_snow_white April 11 2007, 20:59:25 UTC

Mmm this was absoultely beautiful.

This is a really interesting pairing, I think it's the first time I've seen any Bill/Gustav mentioned on this site. Actually Gustav/anyone! But it's nice to see him getting some attention for a change, and you've certainly chancged my opinion of him for the better.

Lovely, sensual writing, suptuosly descriptive and nice characterisations. I liked the way your portreyed the twins especially. It's a lovely refreshing change to see the brotherly closeness and twin connection without the twincestuousness.

I feel so sorry for Tom and very intrigued as to what his reaction may have been.

I really hope you continue posting these wonderful fics!

beren_writes April 12 2007, 06:54:27 UTC

Thank you :).

I'm glad you enjoyed the Gustav/Bill pairing, it was fun to write. One day Gusti will smile in a posed publicity shot and then the world as we know it will come crashing down ;).

I will admit to liking a bit of twincest every now and then, but I think it's fun to explore the simple twin angle as well.

Thank you again - I hope I keep posting them too :). I need to give my muse a little kick up the arse and finish the third one :).

asha_nightmare April 12 2007, 00:26:25 UTC

OH MY GOSH.

That was wonderful.

Bill and Tom coming out to their parents seriously had me rolling in laughter and the way you stay true to Gackt's speech patterns is lovely. I particularly was impressed about the little bit about time of day means little to him.

I also love the way you incorporate Gustav into the story and give him the spotlight for a while. I remember while I was reading the bit where he was coming out to Bill and mentioning there had been one or two boys he liked if one of them was Bill, only to find out later it was! :P

I actually read the first chapter to this, but stopped halfway through because I have a few (read: a lot) bad memories associated with Gackt (although that's not a story to be told here). I clicked on this by accident, but I'm really glad I did.

I'm looking forward to reading more from you!

beren_writes April 12 2007, 06:59:36 UTC

Thank you :).

Bill and Tom coming out to their parents seriously had me rolling in laughter
:D - I thought they were going to have to come clean pretty soon since mothers seem to be able to read their children's minds at times.

the way you stay true to Gackt's speech patterns is lovely
Thank you ... everytime I write him in this series I just think 'arogant, Japanese vampire' and it all falls into place ;).

Drummers are often underrated, I enjoyed giving Gustav some limelight :).

I'm sorry to hear about your bad memories, but I'm glad you liked the fic anyway.

Thanks again.

tiggerdabounce2 April 12 2007, 00:35:20 UTC

Your writing is devine
@->-
A Rose for you.x

beren_writes April 12 2007, 07:00:09 UTC

Thank you :D. *hugs*

tiggerdabounce2 April 12 2007, 11:08:45 UTC

*big hugs*
your welcome

ciera_th April 12 2007, 20:32:06 UTC

I love your writing.
GREAT story.
I never would have expected
Bill and Gustav.
You really surprised us all.
You twisted it.
I thought that it would probably
be Bill and Tom.
But great story all the way.

beren_writes April 13 2007, 07:28:02 UTC

Thank you :).
To tell you the truth I didn't really expect Bill/Gustav either until I was writing the scene where Gustav talks to Bill and suddenly it happened ;). I wasn't even 100% sure Bill was going to say yes until a bit after that either and then the ending sort of slipped into place in my head and voila.