The Heartless and The Beloved Ch.1

[bennyaan]

Title : The Heartless and The Beloved
Pairing : TegoPi~
Genre : Angst? *gasp*
Rating : pg 13
Summary : Yamapi is a mysterious man who begged to stay in Tegoshi’s house
with a hidden purpose to complete his task. *okay, that’s not even a summary…*

!Please take notice that the parts in dark grey are Yamapi’s part

and the dark blue parts are Tegoshi’s!

Comments

[dazehyde]

Bennyaan... *hugs*
What a great fic ne~
Can't wait for the next chapter!!! ^0^

[bennyaan]

daze~~ *hugs back* xD
Thank you <33
I'm writing right now =D

[dazehyde]

Wah... so i can read chapter 2 asap ne~ XD
Thanx a lot dear *hehe*

Btw, I'm just reading your other fic.
Baru sampe chapter 5 say.
Ntar di komen kalo uda selesai ya.

Ganbatte for this new one!!! ^0^

[bennyaan]

ehehe~
*besok udah sekolah lagi sih T__T*
oh, okay darl *digebuk gr2 sok kenal*
ganbarimasu!!!
thank you <33

[zxcvbnm109]

yay! new fic!! I like the layout, the different p-of-v's
will be waiting 4 the next chapter!^^

[bennyaan]

yayyy XDDDD
I'm writing! I'm writing~!
thank you chuu~

[krizzth]

yay a new fic :P
i like the first chapter, i'll be waiting for the next chapter ^-^

[bennyaan]

thank you! sorry 4 the late rep though >,>

[bennyaan]

ehihihi *smirks wider*
no! then I'm afraid I'll kill you =_=;

[bennyaan]

NYAHAHAHAHAHAH LOL
*I know I sound mean but really, this time I made my brother scolded me 8D*
of course not! *pats*
If you die then I won't be able to read such funny comments again XD *kickedandbricked*

'¬'

[yamap_oukoku]

oh vanny-chan!! *(^(♥)^)*
more! that's so cool! I'm loving it わーい♪ヽ(∩。∩゛ヽ)
i wonder what Pipi-sama is here!? (reminds me of a mix of kurosagi/deathnote XD ) tell me tell me tell me onegaishimasu XD
oh and...
dont ever think of making any other story than tegopi! xD

Re: '¬'

[bennyaan]

rinaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa *bigtighthugs*
thank you T____T
ehehehehe... you have to guess yourself 8D