Kyuhyun smiled, as he watched the little Seunggi playing together with his sister, Da Hae who can just barely walk. The little boy kept smiling as Da Hae walked towards him and fell in the process.
“Seunggi-ah, you should hold her when she wanted to stand up, like this.” Kyuhyun went to the little girl, and slowly held her up, leaving Seunggi in
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this is just perfect, when i refresh my friends page, your fic appear and i click it like crazy person and spot!
but after i finish reading it, i can't comment because i need you to screen my comment first. kekeke
so, now my comment:
*cries in the corner*
beautifully ended.
should i tell you i love you? i guess you already know.
yes, there should be a oneshot! you can't leave it there.*pout*
not when Sungmin regain his consciousness.
*if you didn't make a sequel, I'm gonna eat you alive*
kekeke
Hey, you killed her! i thought i will got the favor to do that. jk.. ^^
<33
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and yeah!! u sure are fast!! i still didn't post this anywhere when u took a spot o__0
seriously, u like this ending? *tears of joy*
i read it myself several times before i posted it, and i think its not so good T__T
glad u like it^^
yeah i killed her *evil laugh*
i just dont like to torture her so much u know? ^^
she's my fav character after all :P
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YOU CAN'T END IT THEEEEEERE. CAN'T. CAN'T. CAAAAAAN'T.
Agree^^, you should write a sequel oneshot or something. XDDD
I really love this~ The thing i really loved about this is the plot, unique and original. :>
Congratulations on finishing your first chaptered fic! :D
Hope to read more from you soon~ :) ♥
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yeah, im trying to finish a few oneshots for it, so just wait, okay???^^
thanks again for the congrats!! i'll try to write a better fic than this next time^^
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I thought you've killed Sungmin when I read the first paragraph. I was like T.T NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. But as I kept reading, Sungmin has been in a coma for 3 years. That's like, the same.
And Hyomin died. Even though the hate for her is there, but I pity her. She must have loss her sense of bearing when she saw them kissing at the park. That must have triggered that green-eyed monster in her.
And Sungmin's brother was the donor. And Ri In will be married to Siwon. Everyone in the story seems to be connected to one another.
I'll be waiting for the oneshots
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yeah, i just cant help but connecting them to each other :P
she did T__T
please wait, surprises will be waiting for you^^
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sequel? there'll be oneshots following this story, so please be patient, sweetie^^
thanks so much for the read <333
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