Comments | benitle_writes: Bank robbery!AU - Jensen/Jared - Money makes the world go round

benitle_writes

Bank robbery!AU - Jensen/Jared - Money makes the world go round - Part 2

Apr 20, 2007 21:16

Back to Part 1, see part 1 for full headers. Jensen/Jared, NC-17, AU

( He had always hoped to find a guy he could be with, have a happy ending with - you know the kind, that clichéd Hollywood thing. Jensen's a romantic at heart. But of course, it couldn't happen; in a Hollywood movie, Jared would be the good guy, and Jensen would be the bad guy that Jared spends the whole two hours trying to stop and eventually succeeds. )

chris kane, -word count: 15001 - 20000, jerrod niemann, jason manns, -fandom: spnrps, eric kripke, sandra mccoy, michael rosenbaum, -warning: au, -genre: slash, -rating: nc-17, jensen ackles, chad michael murray, jared padalecki, steve carlson

Comments 161

estel_willow April 20 2007, 19:21:43 UTC

Oh BABY! You know already how much I love this story, but I'm going to tell you again because I don't think I could ever tell you enough. My favourite bit is still the ending, the whole epilogue.

You are awesome. You rock harder than anything I've ever known and I am so very proud of you for this. I really am. Well done, honey. Well done.

benitle April 20 2007, 19:36:17 UTC

Thank you, honey. I actually can't thank you enough because I think no matter how often I tell you, I still can't bring across just how grateful I am for your help and encouragement.

I'm happy that you still like the ending and hopefully you'll defend me when people start throwing things at me. ;)

Just...THANK YOU!

estel_willow April 21 2007, 02:00:39 UTC

*does the dance of I told you people would love it* \o/ <- that's me dancing the dance of 'I-told-you-so'. *wins at everything*

You rock. I love you. ♥

benitle April 21 2007, 07:59:28 UTC

*clings*

♥

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benitle April 20 2007, 22:19:53 UTC

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed. :)

I actually like the ending best of it all because it's so mean and leaves room for interpretation. *laughs*

I'm so happy you liked the fic, thanks for taking your time to tell me!

taniapretender April 20 2007, 20:58:11 UTC

A.W.E.S.O.M.E.

I really, really loved this.

And gosh, the idea of badass!jensen makes me happy in my pants.

Funny, but I thought you'd play the end differently. Maybe more the Hannibal way, with Jensen bumping back behind JAred, like, in his car or something, forcing him to drive somewhere, talking to him, taking him hostage I dunno.

This was amazing ;)

benitle April 20 2007, 22:24:50 UTC

THANK YOU! I'm really happy that you liked the fic.

I have a huge kink for badass!Jensen. He's so sexy. ;)

Your alternate ending sounds cool. I wanted something that leaves room for interpretation. It's actually the reader's choice what Jared does to Jensen now.

Thank you again so much for taking your time to read and comment.

lalita82 April 20 2007, 21:06:36 UTC

Oh My, Petra, Sweetheart!

I squee with joy when I saw this on my flist. You did a wonderful job and I just love it,the bank scenes, the talk between Jared and Jensen, the sex, the ending. Love it all!!!!

♥

benitle April 20 2007, 22:28:42 UTC

Thank you so much, Vanessa.

It felt good those last weeks when I kept talking about this in my LJ that people were as excited about this as I was. The squeeing was so nice.

I'm happy that the fic didn't disappoint and that you enjoyed it, honey.

Thank you for taking your time to read and comment. ♥♥

YUM-MY! jencat004 April 20 2007, 21:25:06 UTC

That was great! But I gotta know, does Jared arrest Jensen, or do they live happily ever after?

Good stuff!

Re: YUM-MY! benitle April 20 2007, 22:32:10 UTC

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed.

It's actually up to you and how you want to imagine it whether Jensen gets arrested or not, that's why it's an open end.

Thank you so much for taking your time to read and comment. :D

Ah, I see. jencat004 April 21 2007, 04:38:02 UTC

Thought there might be a part three, so I was wondering. But I like the leaving it up to us too! It's fun to leave some fics open-ended, and it worked very well with this one!

Re: Ah, I see. benitle April 21 2007, 08:07:16 UTC

Unfortunately, I'm not very good with sequels either.

I thought an open end would make for an interesting change and if I had to be honest, I couldn't quite make up my mind either whether I want Jensen caught or not. *g*