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Untitled - Sam/Dean - Fic

Aug 19, 2006 22:19

Title: Untitled [11]
Author:benitle
Rating: PG-13 (?)
Pairing: Sam/Dean Winchester
Fandom: Supernatural
Warnings/Spoilers: Wincest, no spoilers, genderswap
Word count: ca. 1,340
Feedback: Yes, please!
Disclaimer: This story is complete fiction. It never happened. I don't own the characters.
Summary: After a spell one of the Winchesters is turned into a ( Read more... )

-fandom: spnfpf, -rating: r, -challenge: 60 minute fics, -warning: genderswap, sam winchester, -word count: 1001 - 2500, -genre: slash, -warning: wincest, dean winchester

Comments 28

pheebs1 August 19 2006, 21:30:11 UTC

I liked this! It worked well for the structure prompt, because I was wondering what was going on at the start, then we went back to what they were initially looking into... really nice.

They’re both naked and Dean curses the fact that he must have been so drunk that he can’t even remember having sex with the chick. HA!!! Very annoying for Dean!

benitle August 19 2006, 21:35:47 UTC

Thank you very much! I actually wanted to write something different but then I thought that this kind of fic actually screams to be written for this prompt because you can work quite well with hinting stuff at first.

Heh, and can't you just imagine Dean being annoyed because he can't remember having sex with a gorgeous girl? *laughs*

Thanks for reading and commenting! I'll tackle yours in a second! :)

pheebs1 August 19 2006, 21:45:15 UTC

It's (if I do say so myself!!!!) a good prompt, the structure one, cos you can apply it to all kinds of fics you might wanna write. And it was great here, to slowly work it all out.

My pleasure m'dear, it was a good read!

benitle August 19 2006, 21:52:17 UTC

It was a good exercise for me because I'm usually totally anal and need desperately to write everything in a chronological order. I'm working on a long WIP series that I want to have finished before I post the first part, because I don't like WIPs much. And there I write it part after part, so this was a nice change!

♥

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benitle August 20 2006, 10:21:16 UTC

It's actually a different one. The other one I told you about is a long series in which Dean is turned into a girl and a lot more plot and stuff.

With this one I just wanted to see how people react to genderswap in general and it somehow worked well with the prompt to write it not in chronological order. So, the other one probably still will come once muses cooperate.

But I'm glad you liked this one. I thought it would be nice to write it from Dean's POV and how he's seeing things. The other story will be told from Sam's POV, the one where Dean is the girl. I'm sure Sam would feel incredibly uncomfortable at first, simply from the way he is. And he surely wouldn't feel well with Dean touching him. (Though this offers the great opportunity for a het!PWP. *g*)

Thank you for commenting and liking. I'm definitely not forgetting about the other one, even though I'm still stuck.

*kisses also*

miman August 20 2006, 08:01:57 UTC

Periods!!! I officially died.
I love the way you use Dean's POV, the soft worry and tenderness. Sam's unease with a different body, not wanting Dean close. Love.

benitle August 20 2006, 10:22:49 UTC

Heh, Sam's a girl for more than a month so it's only natural for her to have her periods. ;)

Thank you for your comment. *hugs* I'm glad that it worked for you and that Dean and Sam came across like I wanted them to!

Yayes! :D

miman August 20 2006, 12:13:50 UTC

You know I adore what you write, infact you introduced me to this fandom, so you've got a very special place in my heart. :)

nina_nicky August 21 2006, 14:30:08 UTC

Wow, you did well with the trigger! ^___^

Would have worked even better if you hadn't told us that there was gonna be genderswap in your header (but as warnings are required you had to, so it's not your fault)

I like the idea that Sam wouldn't let Dean touch him when he was a girl. It's so him. ^-^

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nina_nicky August 24 2006, 15:39:36 UTC

Thank you ^-^

benitle August 22 2006, 10:14:08 UTC

Thank you! When I read it, I first didn't know what to do with it, but then it came to me! It must be a genderswap. Heh.

And yes, the surprise would have been quite enormous, wouldn't it? but well, rules are rules. And I know from quite a few people on my flist that it's simply not their thing and I know how annoyed I am when someone doesn't give proper warnings and I end up reading something I would never have with full warnings.

I guess it would be quite a shock for both of them, but Sam would have his own ways and would be a little uncomfortable with it all.

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

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benitle August 22 2006, 16:34:57 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad that it worked for you. I guess the wincest is only as subtle as it is because the whole thing was written within 60 minutes.

I guess, I should try and expand it because I quite like the idea and the structure. Keep an eye on it!

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D