Prompt five for deadly sins challenge - Gluttony - Luis García

[benitle_writes]

Series: Saligia

Comments

[atlanticsoul]

Aw, aw...the Padre starts to understand Luis' sins.

Poor him, though - if Luis tells him that the lover is "he", the Padre will probably have a heart attack. *shakes head*

Very well written, as usual. Well done! :))

[benitle]

Yes, he's seeing the real little Luis. :D

Oh, Luis will have to tell him sooner or later, sí. He cannot keep it secret that he's doing a man.

Thank you, love! Glad you enjoyed.

[winter_solstice]

yay, Luis is getting even more devilish!
i wonder how much more the poor priest can take. :D

[benitle]

Heeee, little devil Luis. He's shoving his real face now. Yes.
Poor old man, there's a bit more to come.

[winter_solstice]

i can't imagine how the priest will react when he next sees Luis.

[benitle]

Neither can I. But I'll come up with something, eventually. *g*

[petiii]

Sinner!Luis is back! Well done! I really love this..

[benitle]

Thank you very much! Glad you're still enjoying this!

[petiii]

I am! And I think it's getting better and better. If that's possible.. ;-)

[benitle]

*blushes* Oh, now that's putting pressure on me. ;)

[thewayforwards]

God but you are brilliant! I absolutely love it. Love love love it *nods*

I'm running out of things to say but I absolutely adore this...

[benitle]

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying this still. ^_^

And don't worry, knowing that you read and like is enough to know! *dances happily*

[niamh_x]

Guhhhhhh...evil Luis, I love it so much!

The poor priest, though, my goddess, he'll have a fit if Luis confesses to his lover being another man... I love how you've brought the priest's thoughts and fears into this too, almost like he's scared he's got the devil himself in front of him.

Luis/Xabi/sticky foodstuffs is a dream come true, omg...

-adds straight to memories, yus-

I love this series!!!

[benitle]

*blushes immensely*

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you like the series and enjoy reading it. I'll try to finish it by Wednesday, before I leave for my little holiday.

Poor priest, yes, such a nice and warm-hearted man and devilish Luis for torturing him like that. Aw. *smirks evilly*

I think the image of Luis licking stuff from Xabi's body is a very nice image. Very nice.

Thank you again for your lovely comment! *squishes*

[niamh_x]

Wheee! -looks forward to it- tho not if you're not feeling in the mood to write, of course. 'tis all good :-)

Just...guhhhh at how you've written Luis and Xabi. I could die. Totally gorgeous!

[benitle]

It's getting a bit hard now towards the end, because I want the climax to be right, so, well. We'll see.

Aw, there might be more of Xabi in the last part, not sure yet. Oh, only two more to go!