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Prompt two for 7_deadly_sins_ - Avaritia - Luis García

Feb 04, 2006 21:11

Series: Saligia

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-rating: r, -warning: multi-chaptered, -word count: 101 - 1000, -genre: slash, luis garcía, -fandom: footballslash, -warning: religious content, -challenge: 7 deadly sins

Comments 25

pegadasnalua February 4 2006, 20:39:32 UTC

I had a hard time now chewing my keyboard.... :D You're good! I can't wait for Luis to have committed the other sins, I'm curious! Maravillosa, eso eres!

benitle February 4 2006, 21:03:33 UTC

Aww, thank you again for reading, liking and commenting.

Luis is probably not going to sin tomorrow, but soon he'll continue being a naughty boy. *g*

kniggit_slash February 4 2006, 20:42:41 UTC

Ohhh....That's...that's really good.

I am really liking these. So very good.

benitle February 4 2006, 21:05:13 UTC

Thank you, my love. I'm glad this is liked and appreciated.

Thanks also for taking your time to comment, it keeps me going. ^_^

lalita82 February 4 2006, 21:00:51 UTC

Bravo! Really good read. :D

benitle February 4 2006, 21:05:43 UTC

Gracias, amor! I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for commenting too!

niamh_x February 4 2006, 21:06:02 UTC

Mmmm, greedy, horny, demanding Luis - we likes! :-D

I really love how you're writing this, the religious element is fantastic. It's great how Luis perverts even the act of confession... ;-)

Red candles too, yes -nods- fits perfectly!

benitle February 4 2006, 21:10:56 UTC

Heeee. I perfectly can picture him like that. Luis the greedy bastard.

It's great how Luis perverts even the act of confession...
He'll get his punishment for that, believe me.

The candles had to be red, didn't they? Isn't red the colour associated with sin?

Thank you so much for commenting.

niamh_x February 4 2006, 21:21:37 UTC

"He'll get his punishment for that, believe me."

Oh, yes! That's what we wanna hear! :-D -cannot wait, heh-

"Isn't red the colour associated with sin?"

The devil and such, yus, heh! It's also associated with saints in catholicism, ie those who bled for the higher good ;-)

benitle February 4 2006, 21:32:56 UTC

He cannot possibly remain unpunished, no. He's a sinner.

Oh, with saints as well? Hm. I'm sure one could turn some kind of plotbunny out of that! ^_^

Thanks for the info!

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dcu_fan February 4 2006, 21:08:15 UTC

Lucifer’s little companion :D

Thank you so much for writing these! I'm really enjoying reading them. :D

benitle February 4 2006, 21:25:34 UTC

Thank you, dear!

I'm glad you enjoy this and devilish Luis. More to come hopefully soon.

Thanks again for reading and leaving feedback.