Arrrr! Pirates again!! Arrr!

Dec 23, 2005 11:12

Title: Pirates 2 (Even worse than Pirates, I know. Sorry about that. Next part will be called Pirates 3)
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-rating: r, -warning: multi-chaptered, -warning: au, -word count: 1001 - 2500, -genre: slash, xabi alonso, luis garcía, -warning: wip, -fandom: footballslash, john arne riise, steven gerrard, jamie carragher

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unitedforever December 23 2005, 18:45:18 UTC
Awww, I still think this is a great basis for an AU. And I love how you all the characters have their own style, like Luis' childlike cuteness, for instance.

I would also like to hear more about Captain Terry. Yes, please. *g*

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benitle December 23 2005, 21:36:04 UTC
Aww, little pirate Luis. I love him. I mean, yes, I am obsessed with Luis, but little pirate Luis. Arrr!

Yes, more to come from MS Chelsea and Captain Terry. Either next part or the one after that.

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benitle December 23 2005, 22:02:54 UTC
Thank you! ^_^

I think Luis is secretly my favourite pirate. He'd be utterly squee, I think.

And yupp. More of Captain Terry to come.

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giggling_marlin December 23 2005, 21:20:58 UTC
I love AUs. When you first told me about the second part I thought the evil pirate will be José. Heee, John is also suitable for this. :)

Oh, sorry *kopfschief* I had quite some hot wine tonight. Not really, uhm, coherrent. Weee, Luis!

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benitle December 24 2005, 10:03:50 UTC
Hee, I thought I should stick with a normal Captain for my evil pirate ship. ;) And yes, Terry'll do the job.

*pets you* I had that the night before. I ended up throwing up. No fun. O_o

*tickles Luis and you*

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giggling_marlin December 25 2005, 10:06:21 UTC
*giggles*

I ended up throwing up. that bad? Ooooooh. *pets your stomach* I was fine, just couldn't come up with something more intelligent than 'Awwwww'. Wine is evil!

Maybe I need a month or so to give a proper feedback, like usually...

Right, Terry will do a great pirate captain. *ggg* He's very much practised in swearing, I find. ;D

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benitle December 25 2005, 11:43:17 UTC
that bad? Ooooooh. One could say that, yes. I usually can drink a lot of wine, that day? I just couldn't. Don't know.

Your feedback was great, so don't worry. ;) *pokes you*

Argh, evil JT. I know nothing about him, since I really couldn't care less about him? And so yes, he might turn out different in the fic. No idea.

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dustbinflower December 24 2005, 07:34:46 UTC
I love it love it love it still and so much respect to you for coming up with the idea and writing this fic. WEE!! Pirates, footballers and slash all in one fic!! It can't possibly get better!!

Glad you found some help in my comments and such. 't was a pleasure.

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benitle December 24 2005, 10:28:13 UTC
Aww, thanks again for the beta. :D

I actually cannot remember how I got up with the idea, oh, yes, it was all Zan's fault because she posted some pirate names from a pirate name generator and then I got carried away. ;) Can you tell that I love pirates and am sooooo looking forward to Pirates of the Caribbean 2?

Glad you still enjoyed it and thanks again so much! :D

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uberwald December 24 2005, 08:11:10 UTC
skweeel!

Stevie said ARRRRR!

John and Luis stopped to have a shag!

Luis bounced!

Chelsea are the bad guys!

*yays forever*

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benitle December 24 2005, 11:22:59 UTC
Squeee! Thanks for the comment. :D

Stevie has to say Arrr. He's a pirate, after all.

And bouncy little Luis. I think I want one. Yes.

John and Luis. Heh. It was you who suggested a shag. I would have gone for Luis not being able to read the map and thus them getting lost. *cough* Or not. ;)

Chelsea must be the bad ones. I first thought about the Mancs, but I really don't like them. So I refuse to write Mancs, yes.

Yay for comment! *dances*

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