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Fic: Elsewhere Come Morning - 2/7 (BBC Sherlock)

Nov 23, 2011 16:26

Title: Elsewhere Come Morning
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 5k this part, 34.3k overall
Betas: vyctori and fogbutton
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summary: On second thought, flirting with an alternate reality version of his flatmate may have been a bad idea. (John-centric AU, follows directly on from The World on His Wrist)

Part One - Part Two - Part Three - Part Four - Part Five ( Read more... )

length: ridiculous, rating: nc17, fic: elsewhere come morning, pairing: sherlock/john, fandom: bbc sherlock, character: original, character: john watson, character: sherlock holmes

Comments 101

PLACEHOLDER (I love you and was just rereading this yesterday) ningen_demonai November 23 2011, 21:58:22 UTC

Oh Goddammit, I have homework to do! Will review right after finishing that and reading this, sob.

Re: PLACEHOLDER (I love you and was just rereading this yesterday) ningen_demonai November 24 2011, 03:53:26 UTC

Right, so! EXCELLENT chapter as always. I see that we're getting to the fallout of John's actions last story and I honestly can't wait to see how it'll all work out, with 2 Sherlocks after him. Cuz of course, God forbid John have a passingly normal life. XD

Re: PLACEHOLDER (I love you and was just rereading this yesterday) bendingsignpost November 26 2011, 22:48:54 UTC

Yeah, this is basically the fallout story. (Can't wait for more explosions to play with in season two!) John isn't allowed to have a normal life. Not ever.

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bendingsignpost November 26 2011, 22:49:57 UTC

Thanks!

The terminology for what to call Sherlock is potentially weird. Sleeping with your flatmate sounds weird but Sherlock =/= boyfriend. But a madman? That, he definitely is.

call_me_ishmael November 23 2011, 22:09:41 UTC

I don't know how you make this better every chapter but you do.

I love that John realizes he needs to tell Sherlock because otherwise the relationship would be a nightmare (just thinking about it makes my head hurt.) I can't wait to see how Sherlock reacts when he figures it out.

I look forward to other Sherlock and John meeting. I'm incredibly curious to see how it will go.

This magically made everything better. Thank you.

Well that was entirely too sane and coherant. call_me_ishmael November 23 2011, 22:24:12 UTC

This is how you should read the above sentences:

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Re: Well that was entirely too sane and coherant. bendingsignpost November 26 2011, 22:52:36 UTC

ALL THE CAPSLOCK, ISH. ALL THE CAPSLOCK.

bendingsignpost November 26 2011, 22:51:59 UTC

The sheer degree of messed up that would be their dynamic if John didn't come clean on this would be truly insane. He "dated" Sarah for two months during which time she knew him two weeks. The timing is awkward.

I am glad magic improvement was magicked.

lindentreeisle November 23 2011, 23:05:29 UTC

Fucking fantastic. I love how you wrote John's freakout and Sherlock's calm coping as well. You're also bringing across a good sense of how actually awful it is to be that out of sync with someone you're trying to have a relationship with.

Wish this chapter was still longer. <3 I'd never stop reading.

bendingsignpost November 26 2011, 22:54:49 UTC

The scenario is terrible and confusing and strange. (Though also potentially handy if they have a fight and John is really determined to avoid him.)

Thanks!

imhit November 24 2011, 01:03:32 UTC

This continues to be bloody amazing.

bendingsignpost November 26 2011, 22:55:06 UTC

Thanks much!