Comments | benchilada: HAIKU

benchilada

HAIKU

Mar 20, 2007 17:52

Now that spring is here
Who wants to be a robot?
Everybody.

japan, haiku, everybody wants to be a robot, never gets old to me, poetry, jet daisuke

Comments 13

5 - 7 - 4 anonymous March 21 2007, 01:39:27 UTC

I liked your haiku.
Guess who noticed your mistake?
Eve·ry·bod·y did.

Re: 5 - 7 - 4 benchilada March 21 2007, 01:45:17 UTC

Sorry?

5 - 7 - 5, biatch iamangelachase March 21 2007, 13:28:58 UTC

I snicker at your artistic license. Besides, I took the last line to be "Ev-er-y-bod-y"--there's your five, anonymous wanker.

Wow. It's 8:30 in the morning and I've already used "wanker" in a sentence. Perhaps this will be a good day.

Re: 5 - 7 - 5, biatch anonymous March 22 2007, 00:12:15 UTC

I'm not a wanker!
A smart-ass jerk-off, perhaps.
But a wanker? No.

Thread 5

agent_ritalyn March 21 2007, 01:44:30 UTC

don't know about that,
robots can only talk back
if they're programmed to.

benchilada March 21 2007, 01:47:39 UTC

I love that only one part of a haiku, traditionally, has to deal with nature.

I cut off his head
and jammed it down the toilet
birds sing in my yard

agent_ritalyn March 21 2007, 02:00:31 UTC

you call that singing?
viva revolucion!
birds are starting war. o_0

http://www.coucoucircus.org/series/images-series/maxheadroom.jpg agent_ritalyn March 21 2007, 01:47:21 UTC

Famous eighties 'bot:
You remember MTV's
Max Headroom? Classic.

Re: http://www.coucoucircus.org/series/images-series/maxheadroom.jpg benchilada March 21 2007, 01:48:53 UTC

Network 23
Blipverts are killing people
Edison Carter

livenud March 21 2007, 03:36:24 UTC

The robot itches
Rutted with slutty Xerox
Now he has the crabs.

(so, er, it's kind of about nature. there are crabs! right on?)

livenud March 21 2007, 03:38:28 UTC

(ps: "haiku makes me hap-
py even when it doesn't
go so good. Look, birds!")

benchilada March 21 2007, 03:59:33 UTC

Did you read my responses to your boy's five questions?