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the_tonberry in ben10_x_kevin11

Crossfire-Inspired fic: Rebound

Nov 09, 2009 15:21

Been on kind of a writing kick lately. It's nice, but all I write about is related to crossfirerp. I AM OBSESSED, OKAY? XD

Title: Rebound
Fandom: Ben 10 AU (Pre-crossfirerp)
Characters: Ben, Kevin
Pairings: One-sided Kevin/Ben, Ben/OC(s)
Genre: romance, hurt/comfort, a smidgen of angst? IDK.
Summary: Kevin spies an opportunity, should he go for it? Survey says ( Read more... )

rp invasion, technical difficulties, fanfiction, poster: the_tonberry

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the_tonberry November 9 2009, 21:42:19 UTC

They're getting along with that juuuuust fine. :3

tonks17 November 9 2009, 21:18:13 UTC

**FLAAAAAAAAIL**

So, I knew you were writing fic. And I knew you were posting fic. But I didn't know WHAT fic. Now I know. AND OH GOD I MISSED YOUR FICS.

Admittedly, I'm already seeing some continuity errors, **shot**

the_tonberry November 9 2009, 21:23:56 UTC

POINT THEM OUT TO BE WHERE ARE THESE CONTINUITY ERRORS I WILL FIX THEM.

tonks17 November 9 2009, 21:31:37 UTC

I HAVE YET TO SEE doinitherostyle and i_know_shit DISCUSS BEN'S SEXUAL ESCAPADES. NO WAIT, THEY DID. KEVIN WAS MAKING FUN OF BEN FOR NOT GETTING LAID. BUT MAYBE I MISSED AN IM LOG. WHO KNOWS? I DON'T! 8D

But seriously. I like tonny writings. I want to squish them, the boys are so delightfully characterized.

the_tonberry November 9 2009, 21:40:46 UTC

Naw, Pan and I just sort of talked that one out behind the scenes. I decided with Lili that Ben's relationship with Julie went absolutely nowhere, so they broke up. Pan and I figured that Ben's combination of dumb jockness and adorkableness wasn't quite charming enough to rake in piles of tail. He had three other girlfriends over the rest of his high school years, described in brief here. So, less of a continuity error and more of a handwave.

Hee, thank you~ I try. =3

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i_know_shit November 10 2009, 00:15:27 UTC

Bitch never did try to get all up on my dick.

doinitherostyle November 10 2009, 01:02:40 UTC

Funny, I ran into her yesterday and she asked if you were single.

i_know_shit November 10 2009, 01:05:47 UTC

And what did you tell her??? *really interested*

doinitherostyle November 10 2009, 01:08:20 UTC

...I said "Bitch, step off my man."

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saiika_von_maou November 10 2009, 17:39:53 UTC

So, I caught the reference. It was pretty direct. Buuuut, I don't think you'll get sued, seeing as this is completely non-profit and you've put no real import to her identity anyway. And I only caught it cuz I watched a lot of Buffy once upon a time. Right, then.

Is it weird that I really loved the fact that you wrote about Ben having sex with girls? Because I oddly loved that aspect...that it was Ben getting laid all over the place instead of Kevin. Also, is it weird that I loved this line: "Gwen nearly choked when Ben mentioned that the sex was better this time around because she hadn’t been as timid as Glee-Club-Girl.Kevin's little daydreams, the way you wrote them, seem oddly in-character to me. This is interesting because I don't normally associate Kevin with fluffy romance-y things like tracing "made-up constellations with their fingers." But reading this made me think that Kevin totally thinks these things in canon all the time, but never acts upon them. And he doesn't act upon them in this, even though he wants to. Major ( ... )

the_tonberry November 11 2009, 01:30:44 UTC

Mrr...I was watching the first episode with Faith when I wrote it, so she just sort of wormed her way in there. Faith, Hope, and Trick, you know? I'M CREATIVE WITH NAMES, REALLY. XD ( ... )

saiika_von_maou November 11 2009, 12:09:48 UTC

Hey, it works, right? Can't argue with that effectiveness. :D

That's a good way to play him. It's...satisfying. Like, "Yes. This is Ben. I accept this." Lol, Gwen. "WHAT IS THIS NONSENSE?" XD Sounds like something either my sister or I would say.

And that totally works for me! *thumbs up* You write a Kevin that gives me the happies. Well, you mostly just write and that by itself gives me the happies. :D

You're welcome, darlin'. You deserve it! <3

the_tonberry November 11 2009, 17:49:33 UTC

If I ever post this to FFN, I'm sure someone will call me on it. XD I'M ABSOLUTELY POSITIVE OF THIS AND I WILL GIGGLE because people there suck I remember a time when there was less suckage on FFN.

Ben's probably the most developed of any character I've ever RP'd (which is kind of sad considering how long I've been RPing). It's just so much fun to sit down and think about him and build on his character. He's so damn entertaining, I have a small mountain of drabbles hanging out somewhere all about Ben and the build up from AF to Crossfire. =3 I should post them, but I wrote them all in my weird rushed shorthand that's kind of impossible to read.

Hee, thank Pan. I'm constantly inspired by her Kevin. XD HE'S A SAP AND I LOEV IT.

<3

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the_tonberry November 10 2009, 22:29:19 UTC

Faith is easily one of my favorite Buffy characters. <3 I also love Eliza Dushku in Dollhouse, she plays a fantastic role in that. So sad it's been dropped until December, but at least we'll get Summer Glau when it airs again! =3

Um, fangirlism aside...Yes, Hope was a pastiche of Faith. I was kiiiiiinda watching the season 3 episode where she was introduced while writing this. Like, for background noise.