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FIC: Instinct (1/4)

Jun 29, 2008 11:19

Title: Instinct (1/4)
Characters: Ben, Gwen, Kevin
Summary: A small town is missing all of its men after they'd done everything in their power to follow a strange woman. When the trio goes to check it out, they find themselves in over their heads.
Notes: This fic is completely finished, but I’m not sure how much space to put between the parts. I ( Read more... )

~instinct, fanfiction, poster: cybra2003

Comments 5

hidan_seme June 29 2008, 20:34:35 UTC

How can you keep them so in-character?! I would be exhausted XD
Oh noes, Kevin! Beeeeen don't fall for the mean ladies tricks! D:
Do something Gwen!!! *collapses* <3

cybra2003 June 29 2008, 22:00:14 UTC

How do I keep them in-character? Um...Smoothies? XD Seriously, though, I just downloaded the eps and started watching them obsessively and studied them like a creepy stalker.

Glad you liked it! I'll probably put up the second part later tonight. :D

hidan_seme June 29 2008, 23:37:37 UTC

Yayness!!!! <3

chained_fire June 29 2008, 23:27:26 UTC

Oooh! Interesting. I'm looking forward to see what sort of spin you came up with to add to the the seductress alien idea. And as hidan_seme said, you've got them all in character once again. You're simply amazing. Behold the power of processed tomatoes research! LOL! ;P

cybra2003 June 29 2008, 23:50:24 UTC

It's sad that you knew I did research behind it. Because, yes, I did. On pheromones and their effects on humans along with the effects of smelling salts and ammonia. (You'll see why in the next part.)

I also pushed the "sci fi" button and played a little loose with the whole pheromones thing. Some stuff will probably scream "PLOT HOLE!" but I couldn't find another way around it. Merf.

Glad that you like it so far! ^^