Spin the Light to Gold (J2, NC-17) 6/6

[belyste]

Sometimes Jared wishes fast food restaurants couldn’t afford such good photographers for their food. Because it’s not enough just to list all the delicious choices on the menu, oh no. No, they have to have huge, mouthwatering pictures of all the options, and every single one looks like the best burger or sandwich or fries that ever existed, fresh

Comments

[finn21]

OMG! YAY! I'll be back with a more coherent comment later, just had to say how excited I am to read this, dude.

[belyste]

Hee, yay! I hope you like it!

[finn21]

So real life kept getting in the way BUT I finally finished! And I LOVED IT

[belyste]

Oh my gosh, I'm blushing so hard right now. Thank you SO much! I'm so, so glad you liked it, and I don't even know what to SAY, because I struggle a lot with that balance you mentioned, the right amount of information with the right number of words, so I'm thrilled that worked for you.

And Jensen! I was worried people might think he was just a jerk, so I'm so happy that his feelings for Jared came across. And thank you so much for the lovely comment! <3

[fryttu]

I'm so thrilled to read it. ♥

[belyste]

Yay, I hope you like it! :D

[fryttu]

To say I like it is a great understatement. :) I love it very much! I've been absorbing into it for two days and now I have a feeling I've spent the summer in that camp. *g* Your descriptions and details are so well done. All that little details about living in the camp and patronizing children! Oh, so good. I liked the scene when Jared and Chad first came to the town and saw the camp - it was so hilarious, they obviously hoped the camp would be greater and way cooler. :D

[belyste]

Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the fic, and thank you for such awesome feedback! I love hearing what works for people, so I like it when people get carried away. :D

I'm really happy that the J2 interactions worked for you - it was hard to convey what Jensen was thinking, and I didn't want him to come off as a horrible jerk. And Chad, well. I like to think of him as a lovable douchebag. No wonder Sophia couldn't resist. :D

Anyway, thank you for letting me know what you liked! <333

[estei]

So much love for this! This is so sweet and cute and funny! What a great start to this year's BB!

[belyste]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

[faith_mars]

I really loved this. This was amazing! :) Gonna mem it.

[belyste]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! :D

[cjmarlowe]

Oh, I loved this! It was so slow and sweet and perfect, and I loved the whole backdrop of the camp and everyone in it.

[belyste]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, especially the camp setting - it turned out perfect, being posted right at the beginning of the summer like this.