BLEACH: Whatever it Takes [Bya/Rukia]

[bellumina]

FINALLY, it's finished. It's going to take me forever to post these things because I have to edit them myself (I need a beta reader badly) and Junior year sucks.

But no complaining. Here's my latest ff100 addition:

Title:: Whatever It Takes
Fandom:: Bleach
Characters:: Rukia/Byakuya, mentions of Rukia/Renji
Prompt:: 023. Lovers
Word Count:: 9,049

Comments

[bellumina]

Oh my god. Wow.

I posted this at like, midnight last night.

I turn on my computer today, and I already have a million reviews.

Wow. I didn't know I was so popular. xDDD

Thank you sooo much. :D And I lovelovelove your icon. :D

[joyinthedance]

This is so touching. I love these three characters so much and you've taken the canon story and fleshed it out so richly...well done.

[bellumina]

Haha, me too. :D They're my three favourite Bleach characters. And ... well, I also love Urahara and Histugaya, but they hardly fit in. x.x Ah well. Maybe some day I'll write a story including them too.

Thanks very much!

[angel_lilith]

I agree with them. I really liked the way on how you focus on what they feel. Great job! ^^

[bellumina]

Thanks. ^^

[eiei]

This is such a great fic, i really love the way you wrote it
it had so much emotion and meaning and the lil twist you put in, instead of the original story, is so well done
i love how you made the rest of the incidents in the original story fall in naturally with your twist and their reactions
it had so much emotions but you put it in a way so that it is not out of character at all for them
i truly enjoyed reading this ^^

[eiei]

Actually I dislike most fanfics but I'm so glad that I read this, a really Beautiful story that's the first fanfic that I really liked and I'm sure that I will return to it from time to time.

Cheers,
Daniel

[bellumina]

Oh, thank god. I was sitting there agonising for ages over whether Bya & Rukia were out of character a lot of the time, so I'm glad that you didn't think so. ^^ I don't have anyone else to edit my writing for me, so I have to go with my own judgment. Luckily, my own judgment was good this time. :D I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[eiei]

yeah Substitute Affections written by akane-rei was the fic that i thought you got the idea from ^^. It's a great fic and i'm glad your story is inspired by hers. While her's is a great multichapter story, yours is a great one shot. It focused on the ByaRuki moments that are missing from akane's story so far, so it is fulfilling to read. So it is almost like the two stories go hand in hand with each other. ah sorry about my long comments but i really like your story ;D

[vitiates]

Well written.

The fanfiction on ffnet was called Substitute Affections by akanei-rei, you may want to credit her for the idea.

^_^

[bellumina]

THANK YOU. I was wondering what it was called ... So thank you Akanei-Rei for being the one who planted this little idea in my head. xDD