First fanfic!

[bellaterra3]

Title: The Pajama Party
Pairing: Hermione/Ron
Summary: Hermione thinks Ron is acting out a little fantasy, but is he?
Rating: R
Word Count: 2749
Written for inell’s Art Challenge, and inspired by _odella_’s fanart.

Any comments are appreciated :)

Comments

[heartundone]

Aww .. that's just to funny!

[bellaterra3]

*blushes a bit* aww thanks!

[angiepangie25]

OMG, that was hysterical! It started out so hot, and I was waiting for the sex. Then Ron made that comment about Hagrid and Dobby dancing naked with Luna commentating, and I don't think I stopped laughing again until I was finished reading. The Weasley's reactions were priceless, and very spot on. I especially loved the twins! This was excellent. Write more fan fiction. Please.

[bellaterra3]

Thanks for the feedback, it made me smile! My schedule is a bit nutty, but I'm trying to set aside more "moi" time to write. I'm so glad you liked the fic! :)

[letmypidgeonsgo]

wow that was hysterical! too many favorite parts to name..tho harry snorting when mrs weasley says hermione's innocent is just priceless! very well-written!

[bellaterra3]

I'm glad you laughed! Especially about Harry- you know underneath it all that boy has a sarcastic wit. :)

[devil_chic05]

That was a totally awesome, spectacularly hilarious piece of writing. I almost doubled over laughing. Definitely a wonderful fic and it's you're first fanfic! Excellent! If you don't mind me asking, I'm having trouble finding which fanart from odella was your inspiration so I was wondering if you could post a link to the art. Thanx.

[bellaterra3]

Thanks so much! I just realized I forgot the underscores for odella's lj username and therefore it takes you to a site that is not the correct one! I fixed it now and added the direct link to the fanart too. I'm slowly getting the hang of this LJ business. :) The link is here as well: _odella_’s fanart.

[__halfpint__]

LOL! I want to know what happens after she apparated home! :D

Cute story!

[bellaterra3]

Thanks! I hope to write a follow up from Ron's POV. It might take awhile since things are a bit hectic at the mo', but I'll post it as soon as I have it :)