Fic: Lost and Found (4/?)

Dec 30, 2010 13:40

Title: Lost and Found
Author: Bella Taggart
Rating: Pg13 for now
Fandom/Pairing: Lost Girl, Bo/Lauren
Spoilers: Up to S01E11
Word Count: About 1500 for this part.
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pandora_007 December 30 2010, 15:03:57 UTC
who is Lara???? you're going to kill me of curiosity before new year??? im glad Lauren is fine and whatever she was doing for this woman has ended.. now.. the question that do not shut.. will Bo finally be able to open up with her?

another great chapter.. short but great..

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bellataggart December 31 2010, 12:03:19 UTC
Thank you! About Lara...All shall be revealed soon :) The worst of Lauren's pain is over so we can all breath a little easier. And as for Bo, well, at the very least the way she looks at Lauren has to change after seeing her in such a vulnerable state. Thanks again for the continued support.

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Excited for more. ext_365583 December 30 2010, 18:03:16 UTC
Short update, but it was worth the wait. Can't wait to hear Lauren's explanation of what happened and how Lara fits into all of this. Not to mention, the explanation of who Lara is and how she and Lauren are connected. I liked Bo's internal rationalization of the situation, how she reflected on her past actions and how they were poorly executed - the ignoring of phone calls, etc. It's nice to see that she's changing her mind about wanting to punish Lauren for being betrayed. I think it's time that Bo sees how much Lauren actually puts herself through behind the scenes.

Great update, again. Hope we get another one soon *hint hint* :) -k

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Re: Excited for more. bellataggart December 31 2010, 12:28:27 UTC
Lauren needs to explain a lot, as you say. And Bo is starting to see her in a new light to say the least.
Thank you for your thoughtful comment, I truly appreciate it. And hopefully the next update will be longer.

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Woefully short....................... anonymous December 30 2010, 18:03:28 UTC

I think I'm becoming seriously addicted to this story.

Great update, fantastically compelling and has me chomping at the bit for chapter 5.............., quick as you like please : )))

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Re: Woefully short....................... bellataggart December 31 2010, 12:34:41 UTC
Sorry about the shortness. I wanted to post it before new years and didnt have time to write more. But hopefully the next one will be longer. Thank you so much for your lovely words. I'll try not to keep you waiting too long for your next "fix" :)

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Getting twitchy here............ anonymous January 27 2011, 20:48:33 UTC
............any chance of an update soon?

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Re: Getting twitchy here............ bellataggart January 27 2011, 20:54:25 UTC
Sorry about that, real life has been hectic as of late. But things are starting to settle down now so I am getting back to the story. Realistically speaking I should have and update in a week or two, but I'll aim for sooner. Thanks for hanging in there..

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swiftlyreloaded December 30 2010, 18:27:34 UTC
Finally Bo gets what an ass she's been to Lauren YAY for that! Great chap short but I'm glad the Doc's alright.

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bellataggart December 31 2010, 12:42:57 UTC
She really was being an ass. But she's beginning to recognise that so I have a feeling she'll try to be less of one as we go on. "Try" being the operative word :) Lauren is eventually going to be okay, after a little recovery time, so no worries. Thanks for the feedback, and happy new year.

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stickyricee December 30 2010, 21:27:31 UTC
I've really enjoyed your story so far. Love your characterizations of Bo and Lauren...the way they talk, think and interact...the intensity between them...all feel completely spot on. I also love the way you portrayed the Ash as kind of a father figure. Looking forward to the next chapter! :-)

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bellataggart December 31 2010, 12:50:47 UTC
Thank you so much. That's a great compliment indeed. The Ash is a complex character I'm having fun deciphering. We'll get to see more of his relationship with Lauren as the story moves forward, since I believe that is an integral part of Lauren. Thank you for taking the time to comment, and I'll try not to keep you waiting too long for the next chap.

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