Fic: Lost and Found (3/?)

Dec 22, 2010 16:42

Title: Lost and Found
Author: Bella Taggart
Rating: Pg13 for now
Fandom/Pairing: Lost Girl, Bo/Lauren
Spoilers: Up to S01E11
Word Count: 3560 for this part.
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Fantastic devmackie December 22 2010, 21:06:47 UTC
I am in love with this tale. The characterisations are spot on, and you have me on tenterhooks!

Thank you for sharing.

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Re: Fantastic bellataggart December 22 2010, 22:24:34 UTC
Thank you so much! I'll try not to keep you "hanging" for too long ;) And thank YOU for reading.

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fembuck December 22 2010, 23:32:20 UTC
The plot thickens!

I loved Lauren kind of laying down the law to Bo in this, and not giving into Bo capricious demands even though she's still strongly drawn to Bo. That being said, I did enjoy Bo's protectiveness and concern for Lauren in this (and I appreciated that she managed to behave like an adult - for the most part - around the Ash). Her "Does she have to be naked?" made me lol and swoon.

Also, what a cliffhanger! Can't wait to see what comes next :D

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bellataggart December 23 2010, 00:05:52 UTC
The plot thickens indeed :)

Lauren is the adult in this relationship by miles (obviously) and even though as you said it's difficult for her to resist Bo, she puts her foot down when she has to. And she had to in this matter, for herself and for Bo.
Bo in my mind is a well intentioned though childish succubus. I have a feeling that facing the realities of Lauren's life is going to make her grow up (or at least try to) pretty fast.

Her "Does she have to be naked?" made me lol and swoon.
I'm glad you liked that, I found that pretty humorous myself :)

As for the cliffhanger; Sorry about that. I cant seem to stop myself. This fic is just begging for them and I'm enjoying myself immensely writing them :)

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. It really means a lot to me.

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mac_meche December 23 2010, 05:03:31 UTC
“Open” She whispered. When the woman started opening her legs, Bo let her hand travel to the woman’s outer thigh to stop her, “the door.” She clarified, grinning.
Bo cursed her luck. Of course Lauren would know how to speak whoknowswhatcha.
“Yes. And I’m sorry but I’m not going to just stand by here and watch him milk you for life like some...like some life cow.”

My favorite lines. Your story is very intriguing. Can't wait to see where it goes. Thanks for writing this awesome story. :)

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bellataggart December 23 2010, 21:27:43 UTC
Those are some of my favorite lines as well, I was grinning as I wrote them, so thanks :)
I'll try to keep the intrigue going. Thank YOU for reading and taking the time to comment :)

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swiftlyreloaded December 23 2010, 08:09:28 UTC
What an update this is a stunning fic. I'm totally curious about what ALL this means. Who's the other woman? What does she mean to Lauren? The Ash he's interesting I like the secrecy about him & Lauren. Thanks & Merry Christmas =)

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bellataggart December 23 2010, 21:29:47 UTC
Thank you so much! Curiosity is great :) All shall be revealed in due time. Thank you for sticking with the story and taking the time to comment. And merry christmas to you as well :)

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WOW Words escape me . . . . dv8bydesign December 24 2010, 00:50:56 UTC
TOTALLY loving this story! It has everything and more! I so love the characters of Dr Lauren and Bo! The series has left so much open with these great characters and thanks to writers like you who are filling in the blanks with great stuff like this! I am so over Dyson and his drama! Dr Lauren is my all time favorite character near and dear to my heart! (I wore a lab coat and did research for a long time . . . Not on Fae mind you! LOL) But I love her geeky and adorable self! I feel there is so much Bo needs to learn about Lauren before she can really appreciate the woman! Thanks for doing that for us! I am hanging on by the tips of my fingers . . . . Wanting, needing to know more (Just like the show--Which only gives us a few minutes of Dr Lauren if we get any of her per episode--Which is killing me!) I so feel the sparkage of Dr Lauren and Bo it is going to keep me warm this Winter! LOL They have so much angst and possibilities awaiting them! I can't wait! Lost Girl was the only TV show this year that i could not ( ... )

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Re: WOW Words escape me . . . . bellataggart December 24 2010, 10:16:14 UTC
Hey Wendy, Thanks so much for continuing to share your support of this fic. I really appreciate it. Puts a smile on my face to see people so passionate about Bo and Lauren :) Obviously I'm right along with you there.
I agree with you that the lack of Lauren on the show is pretty frustrating. She should be out of the guest star and into the full-time category already. With the Dyson-Bo storyline I feel like they moved so quickly that there was no time for tension to build, or people to get invested in. They were in bed from the first ep. and in a relationship by the last of what was a very short season. Boring.
Lauren-Bo on the other hand has so much tension :) So many possibilities. So much potential...
Thanks again for your lovely comment and I will try not to keep you waiting for long.

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