After All This Time... (16/17)

Sep 30, 2009 20:08

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sapphicwarrior September 30 2009, 18:46:51 UTC
this was a wonderful update! Just the other day I had been wondering about your fic so when I saw an update today, I jumped up and down :).
Erica with orange and green hair really had me laughing.
And finally they are back together again :) :) :).
Only one part left :(
Awesome update!!

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bellataggart October 1 2009, 12:08:18 UTC
Thank you!!!
I know it took me a while but finally they are back together. Just one more epilogue-ish chapter to wrap things up and its finished. i cant believe it...

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bellataggart October 1 2009, 12:12:00 UTC
Thank you very much. i'm glad people are enjoying carrot top Erica, i've had that image in my head for a few months now and it was making me smile as well :)
You know Callie was about to yell at Erica in the door but hey who can yell at a cold and shivvering, orange haired Erica Hahn...She took pity :)

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berlygruvr September 30 2009, 21:36:36 UTC
That was wonderful and SO worth the wait!!!
All this time I wondered what had kept Erica from their date. I loved Erica going to get her hair done. How utterly sweet and shows how much she was looking forward to their date as well.
Loved the part where Erica walked all that way to Callie's apt. I had to giggle at the part where no one stopped to help though! Who wouldn't be scared to stop to help the beautiful lady all dressed up with bright orange hair!
Aw hated that Callie missed her messages but I am like her who checks their home phone anymore?!
But the best part is that they are back together! You did a great job on this chapter! (and you made your 'deadline'-double yahs!!!!)

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bellataggart October 1 2009, 12:21:38 UTC
Yay! Glad you liked it. Definitely double yay for the deadline, it took some effort but now that its written i'm feeling much much lighter. :)

Oh the hairdresser... "Who wouldn't be scared to stop to help the beautiful lady all dressed up with bright orange hair!" Hahaha, thats a great way to put it. And you're right, who wouldnt indeed.

The hair didnt turn out as Erica planned, neither did the messages, nor did the date. though i dont think either of them are going to complain in the morning ;)

Thanks again for the comments, i really do appreciate them...

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slburn05 September 30 2009, 21:50:52 UTC
Can't wait to see the last part, but sorry to see the story come to an end. Great chapter.

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bellataggart October 1 2009, 12:22:47 UTC
Thank you very much. The last part shouldnt take too long to post since this chap. was the big one.

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woohoo nybullmastiffs October 1 2009, 00:11:48 UTC
Definitely worth the wait Bella!!!! What I love about how you write is that it is so realistic. That is how Callie would think. I really love that Erica was more upset about her hair than anything that was great. Reminds me of my partner she would be most upset about that too :)

Looking forward to the last chapter with mixed feelings - sorry to see it end but glad it looks like it will have a happy ending.

Michelle

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Re: woohoo bellataggart October 1 2009, 12:30:18 UTC
Thank you Michelle!!
This chapter being posted is really majorly thanks to you since you were the one that gave me the idea to put a deadline. You see, i really do work better under pressure.
i have been laughing about Erica crying about her hair for weeks nows. Glad you enjoyed that.
The last chapter shouldnt take too long to post since this was the big one. it seems unreal that its finaly coming to an end..

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Re: woohoo nybullmastiffs October 2 2009, 12:30:05 UTC
Glad to help. I am told I am pretty good at motivating my students to get their work in on time - guess it is a gift :)

I can imagine it is tough for you to bring this story to a close. You have taken us on a great journey with Callie & Erica. I appreciate the realistic and honest way you write them. I have enjoyed the story very much and will miss it :(

Michelle

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