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[APH] Falling in Love in New York City - (9 / ?)

Jun 02, 2011 23:28

Title: Falling in Love in New York City - 9 / ?
Genre: Romance, drama, AU.
Pairings: USxUK, slight FrUK.
Rating: NC-17 / M
Warnings: Language, sexual content, adult themes such as infidelity, alcohol and some drug use.
Summary: Arthur Kirkland had only intended to dance away his stress and haunting past; never would he have thought in a million years, ( Read more... )

❖mature!sex, ❖filinyc, ❖usuk

Comments 20

pandawolf June 4 2011, 11:17:42 UTC

Francis is such a douche D<

Where's the real smut between Alfred and Arthur? >|

bellanovaskies June 4 2011, 14:14:01 UTC

Yes he is. A very BIG douche. :l He ought to be ashamed of himself really.

A-And... well.... soon? Gotta build up that sexual tension, eh? :'D

pandawolf June 5 2011, 10:17:23 UTC

And his douchery will someday come back and bite him in the ass hard?

Sooo, you build it up and when it's the time it will be epically explosive, yeah? XD

bellanovaskies June 5 2011, 13:39:56 UTC

In a vary hard way. He'll be feeling that bite for the rest of his life. :p

Yes, that is exactly it. It'll be mind-blowing! XDD

renuki June 5 2011, 01:58:55 UTC

........

I am going to punch Francis in the fucking FACE!!! *snarl*

*pats Arthur on the head* At least you have Alfred! :D

*stares at the space cowboys and pirate part* Oh, I remember watching that from the sidelines on Tumblr! :D *cackle*

Oh? You had to clean your sheets? Well, well... *evil grin*

bellanovaskies June 5 2011, 13:43:27 UTC

We should make shirts! The 'Let's punch Francis in the face club'. ;D He's not that bad a guy... he's just an ass. XD

Yes! I thought it'd be cool to put it as a little inside joke in there. I'm glad that actual tumblr users caught the reference. Even if it is rather obvious. :p

As for the sheets, oh come on. Just because we change them doesn't mean doesn't mean.... :o

renuki June 6 2011, 04:17:28 UTC

I will gladly join that club. :D

*grins*

Review (Part 1) k1m333 June 18 2011, 20:13:39 UTC

Double review for you! =P

I can tell that this chapter marks the beginning of a series of big changes in Arthur's life, and I am convinced that those changes will be for the better - even if I expect a great deal of trouble before the long-awaited happy ending. One only has to observe the reactions and thoughts that Francis elicits from Arthur (frowns, anger, frustration, negative and suicidal thoughts) and compare them with those evoked by Alfred (smiles, good mood, comfort, positive and relaxing thoughts).

I find it quite funny that, while Arthur was hesitating between going to France with Francis and just calling the whole thing off, but was mostly resigned to do what he thought was best for Alfred (even if he hated the option it left him), Destiny has taken a decision in his stead. That's the true sign, Arthur! XD By the way, I love that you used Arthur's canon absentmindedness to make him miss his flight. I find it to be quite endearing a trait for him. (^_ ( ... )

Review (Part 2) k1m333 June 18 2011, 20:14:24 UTC

I swear it's impossible not to "awwww" when Arthur jumps on Alfred and sobs in his embrace while the American tries to comfort him. Oh, and congrats to you on that part, because instead of falling into the cliché he-fits-into-my-arms-so-well mindset, Alfred marvels at the fact that Arthur trusts him as a confident, and feels proud of it, which is in complete accordance with his canon hero complex. (Some more "awww"s were unashamedly uttered when Arthur stayed snuggled in Afred's jackets and when Alfred ran his fingers in Arthur's hair. That was just so cuuuuuuute! (Honestly, that whole scene made the fangirl in me coo in earnest ( ... )