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bellalumina

Fic: "A Safe Place" (Prison Break, M/S)

Nov 24, 2006 12:08

“A Safe Place”
By: Bella Lumina
Fandom/Pairing: Prison Break, Michael/Sara
Rating: PG-13
Canon: Up to and including “212: Disconnect”
Disclaimer: Not mine, no profit gained.
Summary: "You’ll have to pardon me if I don’t really trust anybody at the moment."

( When she hears the knock at the door of the hotel room, she sucks in a deep breath... )

prison break, michael/sara, fic

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bellalumina November 24 2006, 19:36:48 UTC

I'm glad you liked it, Anna! I couldn't help but write a little reaction piece after seeing the last two episodes. I want Michael and Sara to be in this mess together so much! I think they're so much more compelling and affecting together than when they're apart.

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bellalumina November 25 2006, 03:37:01 UTC

I was hoping that, too, but now I'm really pretty sure it's not going to happen. I'm going to both hate and love seeing Sara stumbling around, trying to figure out her own mess and kick some bad-guy ass at the same time...

modernthirst November 24 2006, 20:52:08 UTC

Aaaaah that was so awesomely awkward! I kept having to look away because I just felt so bad. You are a GOOD writer, man.

His voice is so hoarse that the first time he tries to reply, no sound comes out. He clears his throat and grinds out, “I won’t.”
I loved that. Oh, Michael.

bellalumina November 25 2006, 03:34:48 UTC

*blushes*

Thanks! Honestly, "awesomely awkward" is pretty close to what I was going for here, so I'm glad it made you feel as uncomfortable as it did. At least, I think I'm glad! :)

And yeah, poor Michael. So human under that God complex...

slowdescent_ November 24 2006, 22:39:39 UTC

Ummm.... this is extremely awesome.

That, and I'm friending you because there's no way I'd ever want to miss more from you. So... yeah. :D

bellalumina November 25 2006, 03:35:39 UTC

Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it. I had no idea if it would even translate at all, so seeing that you got it is really great!

Great work rosie_spleen November 24 2006, 22:47:32 UTC

This is fantastic on so many levels. Very believable for Sara's POV, that she would be threatened by the whole bathroom situation. Loved that she tried to clear her mind herself and the entire anxiety about having a shower.

Also, the fact she starts off angry, then reality sets in and she is in a panic. Then she finally resigns herself to not wanting to do it alone.

Michael is also very believable - worried, horrified, awkward, protective.

A fabulous read. Thanks for sharing

Re: Great work bellalumina November 25 2006, 03:38:32 UTC

Thanks for the awesome feedback! I'm glad it worked for you on all of those levels. I never know if what's in my head is going to filter out the same way on the page or not. I'm happy to see that it struck the same chords in you that the idea did in me!

stealmy_kiss November 24 2006, 23:11:52 UTC

I just have to squee a little here because I am so glad you wrote this. I've been wondering what Michael's reaction to Sara's wounds would be like and this is just perfect.

Thank you for sharing!!

bellalumina November 25 2006, 03:44:36 UTC

Thank you for commenting! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and I'm glad it felt true to their characters!