Second Plan (IV in the Second Verse)

Sep 25, 2009 20:49

Title: SECOND PLAN
Author: bellajayd
Rating: R
Pairing: Castiel/Dean, jealous!Sam.
Spoilers: Yes! Up to the most recent episode of Supernatural.
Warnings: There is NO rape/NCS or main character death. Everything else is fair game. Changed!Dean, Changed!Castiel.
Disclaimer: This is all a beautiful lie, but let me tell it anyway.
Word Count: 1,850/6 ( Read more... )

fandom: supernatural, pairing: dean/castiel, type: fanfiction, pairing: sam/ruby, genre: slash

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halcyon_age September 26 2009, 01:44:58 UTC
yay Second!Verse and yay for Dean feeding Cas. That was so cute. and the end? more touching.

I really liked how you wrote Ruby. Her fear was really palpable. But can you explain to me how you envisioned her clocking out of her body?

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halcyon_age September 26 2009, 01:46:55 UTC
hehehe I esp loved the last line. Dean and Cas should not let Sam and Ruby have one up on them.

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bellajayd September 26 2009, 04:23:20 UTC
I know, right? Sam and Ruby cannot win the sex wars!

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halcyon_age September 26 2009, 01:50:39 UTC
Is it like she just kind of spaces out? Cause when I was reading I couldn't stop picturing it as her of her leaving her vessel. You know with the black smoke.

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bellajayd September 26 2009, 04:23:46 UTC
You are far too kind! Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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sparseparsley September 26 2009, 02:55:25 UTC
I just read all four parts tonight and I am really enjoying this. Dean and Cas becoming DeanCas is kind of romantic and terrifying at the same time.

And the up-against-the-bathroom-sink scene in the second part? Scorching.

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bellajayd September 26 2009, 04:25:56 UTC
Oh wow! You read all 4 parts now?! That's awesome!! I'm so happy you like it and that it comes across DeanandCas is both romantic and something to be very afraid of! Thanks for the lovely review.

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savingfaith333 September 26 2009, 03:15:15 UTC
Oh man, how dare you end it there! Especially with that whole Bobby get's an eyeful line. Shame on you Bells! I really love this story so far. It's so sweet! Adore the whole "soulgasming" thing and how close Dean and Cas are getting to each other. And the way he's helping Dean through his emotions like this? *sighs* How I love these two!

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bellajayd September 26 2009, 04:28:45 UTC
Aren't the just the best? I was really worried about starting up this series again because since I started it my authorial voice for Dean/Cas has changed alot, but this was a ton of fun to write once I got warmed up. I'm happy you liked it, even though it was a plotty bit without much Dean/Cas!!

*twirls you*

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morganoconner September 26 2009, 03:55:05 UTC
You updated this! You really, really updated this! *hugs you* I'd given up all hope, lol.

Oh, man, but how could you end it there???? Must have more! *grabby hands* I can't wait to see just what it is Bobby gets an eyeful of. :P

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bellajayd September 26 2009, 04:30:01 UTC
Heee! Not to worry the whole thing is plotted out and ready to be finished! I just got majorly sidetracked because I wrote a ton of fics for Renegade Angels - sorry for the hold up.

. . . and I'm pretty sure you know what Bobby walks in oh ;)

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