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Pink Champagne - Chapter One, Part B

Jan 15, 2012 19:41

Title: Pink Champagne - Chapter One, Part B
Rating: Overall rating NC-17. Chapter rating PG-13
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adam/michael, gabriel/sam, dean/castiel, drag verse, supernatural, rating: pg-13, fic, fanfiction

Comments 9

ladyknightanka January 16 2012, 01:32:39 UTC

This was such a lovely start, bb! I like the distinct differences between Sam, Dean, Adam and between all of Castiel's brothers. I've really been looking forward to this one (it and angsty Adam mpreg the most). Also, the tiny reference to Lucifer/Nick amused me very much; I love all the angels with their vessels as possible pairings, but Nick is my ideal Lucifer, not Sam, so it's selfcest in my head, but it's Mark Pellegrino and he can pull it off. XD

Eager for more!

bellacatbee January 17 2012, 21:22:16 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Mark Pellegrino is very yum and now I feel I should write something with Lucifer in Nick's body touching him up just for the selfcest. Now I now what I'm doing with my day off. Angsty Adam mpreg might get saved for the Adam bang now (I'm so excited about that!) but I'm glad you were excited for this!

Next chapter is more Adam and more makeup because I can't get enough of either of those things.

lick_j January 29 2012, 04:21:14 UTC

THIS IS LOVELY!!!! :D

I'm pretty sure the boys will eventually come in terms with each of their problems!

Can't wait to see more <3

bellacatbee January 29 2012, 10:44:20 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far.

More should be coming soon! Just editing.

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nileflood February 2 2012, 22:59:07 UTC

I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it m'dear!

The cross-dressing theme is going to continue throughout, just to give you a heads-up. Not to give anything away, but Cas probably will stop at some point, Sam will probably never try it, but the others will be in-and-out of dresses in the next few chapters.

That being said, I hope you stick with us because I think there are some very entertaining bits still to come! :)

grlkat2 February 3 2012, 15:19:23 UTC

Yes, Dean, Kate IS an awesome lady.

I really liked how they just seem to gravitate to their angels and vice versa. Sam and Ruby's relationship, super awks and well, poor Sam. And Dean, good ol' straight 100% heteronormative Dean..... I really like Cas, and I love that his stage name is Misha, that's perfect. And the little tidbits about Adam and the rest of the family being slipped in, it's beautiful. I really want to see Michael's entrance though, especially since everything's been a family affair and whatnot. I can't wait XD

bellacatbee February 3 2012, 22:00:17 UTC

She damn well is.

I couldn't not use Misha for Cas's stage name, especially with Misha's lovely cross-dressing wedding pics. (I love that man). I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Michael should be along in Chapter three and causing problems for his brothers.

antinickname March 19 2012, 15:23:54 UTC

The story is cute and entertaining, and I am enjoying it so far, but I am having a problem with the dialogue. I think it's pretty confusing because the characters often bring up numerous questions or statements in their own piece of dialogue and when the other character answers, it's disjointed. For example:

“Sammy- are you driving, or your brother?” Gabriel asked, and gestured to the barmen, “If Sammy’s not the driver the rest of his drinks are on my tab.”

Sam swallowed his mouthful. “Dean’s driving. Dean always drives. The only time he’d ever let me drive is if he was dying.” He smiled ruefully, shaking his head at the thought. Dean loved that car more than Sam thought he’d ever loved a person. Whenever something went south for him he’d be out in the garage at all hours, fixing it up or washing it even when it didn’t need it. If Dean showed people half the consideration he showed his car he might get a bit further with them, Sam thought. He was shocked by Gabriel’s offer. “No way. I can’t accept that, Gabriel.” In normal ( ... )

bellacatbee March 22 2012, 21:03:58 UTC

Thanks for your review and I don't think you're being harsh or super-critical. This is actually really helpful for explaining the issues in the fic and what's been wrong with it so thank you very much for going that in-depth.

I'm glad that you're enjoying it even with the confusing dialogue. We've been trying to iron it out and hopefully the issue is being sorted/is sorted now.

Again thank you for the review and the con-crit. Its been really helpful.