Something Decided

Jul 17, 2010 02:18

For a prompt on Your Scribbles

A continuation of J.R.'s story....I am really enjoying writing her. She is fast becoming one of my favorite characters to write because she is simple yet so complicated. There are so many things that she still needs to figure out in life, she's so raw and real. I love the addition of Tommy to the story. He adds alot ( Read more... )

new story, j.r., your scribbles

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writing2death July 17 2010, 17:16:40 UTC
WOW. Definitely worth the wait! This is a wonderful take on the prompt! I love both your characters and how we learn exactly what J.R. has to decide.

Definitely don't worry about the stereotypical character - they were less of requirements and more of bonus points. We should have called them that instead.

Thank-you very much for filling it!

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bella_dayenu July 18 2010, 16:05:29 UTC
*blush*
Thank you. J.R. is extremely fun to write and sometimes has NO filter when she talks, so that's interesting. I love Tommy. He was a surprise joy because I had envisioned him one way and then he turned out completely different.

Okie dokie about the "bonus" but I still would have liked to have found a way to add all that in. It just felt forced and fake every time I added more to it. I already was not happy with the ending (It was VERY late and I was VERY tired) and might eventually re-write that so I didn't want to keep fooling around with adding it. SIGH.

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kramskii July 18 2010, 21:11:19 UTC
You know that you are brilliant right? Just thought that I would inform you again, in case you forget. I love reading about JR. She's really interesting and I love Tommy. I was sad that he was dead but, he's still there in spirit. :)

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bella_dayenu July 19 2010, 15:34:28 UTC
*blush* I....I don't know how to respond to that. *epicblush*
Thanks, that means alot to me. ♥

J.R. ♥ Argh...what do you say about that girl? She's so silly but serious and flighty but smart. I adore her.

Tommy isn't going anywhere anytime soon. I wasn't sure if I would have him fade away and just write J.R. but the two of them together are just too fun to write. I think he can stick around. (J.R. just clapped and did alittle dance..haha)

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kramskii July 22 2010, 02:55:23 UTC
It makes me blush that you don't know what to say to my comment.

(I'm glad J.R. knows how to dance :D)

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