Prologue

Feb 07, 2007 21:18

“NO! You’re not gonna do this! I forbid it ( Read more... )

the story never ends

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masb1987 September 20 2007, 02:43:15 UTC
This is okay for a first fic, but "bohemians," "t-cells," and "the loft" should not be capitalised. Also, you might want to work on your characterisations. Both Roger and Mimi are a little OC.

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bell_jar_fics September 20 2007, 02:52:09 UTC
Thanks for the info. I always assumed that they were capitalised, as a lot of other fics I read prior to writing this had them that way. And sorry for the OOC Roger and Mimi. Hope they're more in character as the story progesses.

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