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belintuchiha

Fill The Emptiness - Chapter Two。

Aug 31, 2011 00:11

Title: Fill the emptiness
Pairing: Onew/Key, Jonghyun/Minho, Minho/Taemin
Genre: au, fluff, angst
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 2486
Sumary: falling in love again with that past love.
Warning: This is unbetaed.

( “I said it’s not your fucking problem ok?!” he said as he turned to look at me. I could see tears on his eyes. )

pairing: jongho, rating: pg-13, pairing: 2min, pairing: onkey, !fill the emptiness, !fanfic

Comments 18

belintuchiha August 31 2011, 04:12:11 UTC

spot to my love kphoria who's always helping with my fics ♥

kphoria August 31 2011, 04:30:35 UTC

This chapter left me very intrigued yeobo!
your writing gets better every day! I'm so proud of you ♥
Fighting for the next chapters!!
Luv u!!! ♥♥♥

suru_jun August 31 2011, 05:48:08 UTC

Your fic is very interesting
I'll wait for the next chap =D
(Espero sea pronto... Animo!!))

=D

belintuchiha August 31 2011, 13:11:00 UTC

jajaja muchas gracias por leer y comentar :D

cychung92 August 31 2011, 06:35:39 UTC

You don't know how happy am I reading this update ;D
Great plot! and I disapprove LuNew so THANK YOU. SHUSH ;P

"WHAT DID HE JUST SAY? ARE MY EARS FUCKED UP? THIS IS NOT HAPPENING. I DID NOT JUST HEAR HIS NAME."
okay, this is sho interesting <3

belintuchiha August 31 2011, 13:12:27 UTC

HAHA HIGH FIVE!
I disapprove of lunew too and any other couple that breaks my onkey anyway!
Im glad u find it interesting, thank you :3

cychung92 September 1 2011, 05:53:31 UTC

Onkey ftw! <3

and another thing is..
I opened the door to find a giant frog smiling at me.
I LOLED SO HARD AT THIS. YOU'RE GENIUS ;P

belintuchiha September 1 2011, 14:19:45 UTC

omg im so glad you did!
I was like "omg how should I describe minho"
and this is the first thing that I thought HAHAHA

tokki24 August 31 2011, 07:15:27 UTC

Oohohohoooo.. The ending part was so eeeuurrrggghhh.. *bite my pillow* XDD~
Interesting much!! Can't wait to see your next update!! Aaaaaaarrrggghh.. *jump jump*

belintuchiha August 31 2011, 13:14:35 UTC

HAHA good good! the ending is supposed to generate this kind of reaction to my readers :P hang in there :3
thank you for the comment :D

7thmin August 31 2011, 07:56:39 UTC

late spot~~~

7thmin August 31 2011, 09:01:33 UTC

omo i missed two chapters shit twin
i am so late but this fic of yours is awesome
i am so hating luna here...i think Kibum
will misunderstand the relationship of
Minho and Onew

will wait for the next chapter
i may post my fic this week

belintuchiha August 31 2011, 13:16:29 UTC

haha is better late than ever twin :3
and omg yes kibum is still shocked that his long lost first love
is now someone related to minhoar xD
yaaay post a fic :3 will be waitinggg