Hope is the last thing we lose。

Jul 01, 2011 13:27

Title: Hope is the last thing we lose.
Pairing: Onew/Key
Genre: au, fluff, angst
Rating: PG
Summary: Kibum discovers that love at first sight might exist.
A/N: bad summary~ I fail at writing haha this is my first onkey fic ever, well first fic in general~ totally unbeta-ed so be nice ok? haha though english is one of my mother languages, I suck at ( Read more... )

!hope is the last thing we lose, rating: pg, pairing: onkey, !fanfic

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keiiru July 2 2011, 07:09:03 UTC
awww !!! i love it !!
please don't make it into a oneshot !! continue please !!
kibum and jinki must get together , one way or another !!

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belintuchiha July 2 2011, 23:34:04 UTC
:O If I come up with a good sequel I'll post it :3
thank you for reading :D

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suki375 July 2 2011, 07:35:50 UTC
You HAVE to make a sequel to this please!!!!!! YOU CAN'T LEAVE KIBUM LIKE THIS!!!
ok maybe you can.....lol
sorry i like it!!

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belintuchiha July 2 2011, 23:34:59 UTC
OF COURSE I CAN MUAHAHA
I'll think about making a sequel :P
thank you for reading ^____^

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keyzy_kyumsy July 3 2011, 03:15:28 UTC
CUTE...awwww <3

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belintuchiha July 3 2011, 03:44:01 UTC
kkk thanks ♥

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belintuchiha July 3 2011, 19:44:43 UTC
haha yes I know, this story actually happened to me D:
so it can really happen to anyone~ haha
if I come up with a good sequel, I'll post it ;)

thank you for reading and commenting! ^____^

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javanice July 4 2011, 09:15:12 UTC
it's awasome bb....
i like it..

but, it's chaptered, right??? :D
i need to know about jinki POV maybe he feels same too....

and i hope you will write about them in present time, if they are realy meant to be, so they will meet again, right?? hehehehe

thanks for sharing bb
<3

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belintuchiha July 5 2011, 22:43:08 UTC
it's not chaptered, it's supposed to be a one shot XD But I know it's mean of me to finish it like that, it's how it finished in real life tho XD
BUT.
I'll maaaybe do a sequel :3 and also a Jinki POV possible, it's a good idea!
thank you so much for reading!! :D

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javanice July 6 2011, 04:50:25 UTC
sequel is good too.... :D
at least i know how jinki feels hehehe because yeah, he kept starring kibum... hehehe

way to go bb~~~
waiting your sequel patiently
:D

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belintuchiha July 7 2011, 04:10:47 UTC
HAHA Jinki certainly felt SOMETHING HAHA we'll see what I can write XD

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