haiku

Jul 21, 2014 05:16

answers are specious:
it's questions all the way down.
I'll just keep swimming.

writing prompts, poetry

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roina_arwen July 22 2014, 21:32:51 UTC
You certain did away with all those extraneous details! Ballsy entry, simple and lovely. :)

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dmousey July 24 2014, 19:54:04 UTC
I feel as if I just went toba mast e r class on Poetry! Thank you for showing me how Chekhov's style could inspire. Brilliant

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dmousey July 24 2014, 19:56:14 UTC
Sorry computer having problems. That shoulder read to a master class. [Laughing]

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eternal_ot July 25 2014, 10:40:14 UTC
Ah! short and apt!

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beeker121 July 25 2014, 20:43:05 UTC
This is a lovely haiku. And of course I'm left thinking turtles...

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