there's no change there's no pace

[belantana]

I think I hold the dubious honour of having written the first ever fic for Little Fish. First-line prompt from lost_spook; apologies that the result will make no sense to you! 800 words. Spoilers. Warnings for long sentences, tense-jumping and gratuitous footy jargon. Oh Australian language, how easily you flow off the tongue (fingers) - ! Sorry guys; I'm

Comments

[lost_spook]

I love it! I have only seen the end of Little Fish, so I am not informed, but that was still wonderful. I love the use you made of my friend's pencils from Woolworths line and how it tied everything together. It's really good.

[lost_spook]

...And I'm thinking of Big Fish, or whatever it was called, aren't I? But still, even not having a clue...

[belantana]

Thank you! I'm so pleased you liked it despite not knowing what was going on... and yes, you might be thinking of Big Fish! I haven't done a first-line prompt before but it was a really interesting way to get started, so thanks.

[midvacent]

Holy shit dude! That's just... amazing. Man. I can't remember the movie that well, but, wow. This feels so real. It really does. It's beautiful. I love the Aussie vernacular, and you put it to such good use. Just brilliant.

[belantana]

Wow, that has to be up there with one of the nicest things anyone's ever said about my writing ever. (I got a Holy shit dude!! *glows*) I'm so excited that you thought it felt real to the movie. And I had great fun with the Aussie vernacular - why don't I have more Australian fandoms??

PS - I see your story but I have to work - tonight tonight!

[midvacent]

Well, your welcome. I need more aussie fandoms too.

[belantana]

Aussie fandoms, why so crap? I don't think I've followed an Aussie tv serial since... um, probably Seachange. OMG SEACHAGE FIC, MUST FIND SOME IMMEDIATELY. *dashes off*