FIRST?! Anyways, love! This is the first time i've commented on your story... I really like it! Taemin is so cute! the falling on each other scene is super adorable! but, how, if taemin fell on his chest, did minho kiss his cheek? wouldn't taemin have to have fallen on his back for his cheek to be facing minho?
Well, I based it off of Taemin's kiss scene on his sitcom where the girl fell on her chest and Taemin fell on top of her. His head would've landed on her shoulder and kissed her on the cheek. :)
*enter first time reader* hi~hi! :D so listening to telepopmusik while reading this is somehow magic :} lol
and yes so small post...hope you make up for it in the next one? eheh >;D
i like your writing style :] not too cliche and not too out there. && the plot is cute. even if with short posts like this one, i still feel ...satisfied? idk the word i hope you get me haha.
i really like the awkward girl!taemin and minho moments :D the subtle teasing...it's marvelous lol.
question: that was onew's pov in that 2nd break right? O_o i hope that gets explained soon. i'm coming to all sorts of conclusions as to what onew + taemin's story is X|
p.s. i love your font style/color. somehow makes reading much more...refreshing? hehe i know random...
Sorry, I take too much pleasure in that. I really dislike the whole Minho/Yuri pairing. Anyway! I really like this story- very original and creative- but sometimes it's hard to tell whose P.O.V it is... Other than that keep up the good work~
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Anyways, love!
This is the first time i've commented on your story...
I really like it! Taemin is so cute!
the falling on each other scene is super adorable! but, how, if taemin fell on his chest, did minho kiss his cheek? wouldn't taemin have to have fallen on his back for his cheek to be facing minho?
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hi~hi! :D
so listening to telepopmusik while reading this is somehow magic :} lol
and yes so small post...hope you make up for it in the next one? eheh >;D
i like your writing style :] not too cliche and not too out there. && the plot is cute. even if with short posts like this one, i still feel ...satisfied? idk the word i hope you get me haha.
i really like the awkward girl!taemin and minho moments :D the subtle teasing...it's marvelous lol.
question: that was onew's pov in that 2nd break right? O_o i hope that gets explained soon. i'm coming to all sorts of conclusions as to what onew + taemin's story is X|
p.s. i love your font style/color. somehow makes reading much more...refreshing? hehe i know random...
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Next time I'll label who's POV is who's.
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keroro minho :DD
bwahahaha the others spying on them from the camera room XD
loved the chapter~!
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I'm waiting for your next chapter you`re doing great
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Sorry, I take too much pleasure in that. I really dislike the whole Minho/Yuri pairing.
Anyway! I really like this story- very original and creative- but sometimes it's hard to tell whose P.O.V it is...
Other than that keep up the good work~
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