Where the hell do I start? (I would just straight keyboard mash, but I did that last night already, and I'm sure you'd appreciate some variety. ;D <3)
I really love the mood. Sure, it also contributes to me going ;;_______;; all through the fic, but that's sort of a good thing? (I should probably not be listening to music box versions of Hikki's songs while I read this - they are amplifying the bittersweetness while I go CHOKECHOKECHOKE on the lump in my throat.)
And then there's the colors of the fic - the lighting, the smoke, the slush. It's like looking at old photographs, acid-eaten over the years, and man oh man, you play the nostalgiac in me so well. <3
Favorite lines: a pale parody of the streaming spotlights of stages and arenas
Tachibana Keita didn't give almost anything a second thought.
to hear his own confused sentiments spilled from another person's lips was disconcerting, a little embarrassing.
<3 (and I use this icon because, text aside, it is so very appropriate.)
<3 <3 <3 You always know your feedback is muchly appreciated, love.
The mood was something I was striving really hard to capture here, since it's basically what the fic hinges on. :3 And the colors - originally, I was trying to put most of the imagery in the lighting, but that didn't work very well, so I used colors, and I think I like how that works better. ^^; And, uh... I want musicbox!Hikki music. :DDDD?
This was supposed to be a Christmas fic originally. Aren't you glad it wasn't? 8D;;
a pale parody of the streaming spotlights of stages and arenas
That's actually the image in my head that started this whole fic. XD; Ahahah.
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I really love the mood. Sure, it also contributes to me going ;;_______;; all through the fic, but that's sort of a good thing? (I should probably not be listening to music box versions of Hikki's songs while I read this - they are amplifying the bittersweetness while I go CHOKECHOKECHOKE on the lump in my throat.)
And then there's the colors of the fic - the lighting, the smoke, the slush. It's like looking at old photographs, acid-eaten over the years, and man oh man, you play the nostalgiac in me so well. <3
Favorite lines:
a pale parody of the streaming spotlights of stages and arenas
Tachibana Keita didn't give almost anything a second thought.
to hear his own confused sentiments spilled from another person's lips was disconcerting, a little embarrassing.
<3 (and I use this icon because, text aside, it is so very appropriate.)
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The mood was something I was striving really hard to capture here, since it's basically what the fic hinges on. :3 And the colors - originally, I was trying to put most of the imagery in the lighting, but that didn't work very well, so I used colors, and I think I like how that works better. ^^; And, uh... I want musicbox!Hikki music. :DDDD?
This was supposed to be a Christmas fic originally. Aren't you glad it wasn't? 8D;;
a pale parody of the streaming spotlights of stages and arenas
That's actually the image in my head that started this whole fic. XD; Ahahah.
I love that icon. <3
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Whatever you were trying for, it turned out fantastic. :3 I'll send you the Hikki music on MSN, then? :D
...yes, I am. @_@ I would've been all ;;O;; on Christmas Day and gotten no cards done. xD
It's a gorgeous image. *___* (I love the icon too. :D I think it's the first non-mine icon I used, besides specific gifts from people.)
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HAHAH. My keyboard mashing at you even though I already talked to you over the phone about it. HOLY CRAP WOMAN.
GUH. Like....I can't even comment properly like Niki can. BRILLIANT. JUST FOOKING BRILLIANT.
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just as Miss.Booshoo has mentioned, this fic does shake our nostalgic senses!
personally, I believe this is something you should post on the keiryo community *grins*
thanks for sharing such a wonderful fic!!
*waves happily*
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*-* I feel like i'm warming up to this couple now~
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