w-inds. drabble

Dec 27, 2004 04:00

Title: Slush
Fandom: wFL
Rating: PG
Characters People: w-inds. (Keita, Ryohei)
Crosspost: w_inds_orgy
Wordcount: 1,904
Notes: Kind of somber and nostalgic. But booshoo says it doesn't suck, so.

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booshoo December 27 2004, 10:12:40 UTC
Where the hell do I start? (I would just straight keyboard mash, but I did that last night already, and I'm sure you'd appreciate some variety. ;D <3)

I really love the mood. Sure, it also contributes to me going ;;_______;; all through the fic, but that's sort of a good thing? (I should probably not be listening to music box versions of Hikki's songs while I read this - they are amplifying the bittersweetness while I go CHOKECHOKECHOKE on the lump in my throat.)

And then there's the colors of the fic - the lighting, the smoke, the slush. It's like looking at old photographs, acid-eaten over the years, and man oh man, you play the nostalgiac in me so well. <3

Favorite lines:
a pale parody of the streaming spotlights of stages and arenas

Tachibana Keita didn't give almost anything a second thought.

to hear his own confused sentiments spilled from another person's lips was disconcerting, a little embarrassing.

<3 (and I use this icon because, text aside, it is so very appropriate.)

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bekkalynn December 27 2004, 13:15:38 UTC
<3 <3 <3 You always know your feedback is muchly appreciated, love.

The mood was something I was striving really hard to capture here, since it's basically what the fic hinges on. :3 And the colors - originally, I was trying to put most of the imagery in the lighting, but that didn't work very well, so I used colors, and I think I like how that works better. ^^; And, uh... I want musicbox!Hikki music. :DDDD?

This was supposed to be a Christmas fic originally. Aren't you glad it wasn't? 8D;;

a pale parody of the streaming spotlights of stages and arenas

That's actually the image in my head that started this whole fic. XD; Ahahah.

I love that icon. <3

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booshoo December 27 2004, 13:51:11 UTC
<33333 :D

Whatever you were trying for, it turned out fantastic. :3 I'll send you the Hikki music on MSN, then? :D

...yes, I am. @_@ I would've been all ;;O;; on Christmas Day and gotten no cards done. xD

It's a gorgeous image. *___* (I love the icon too. :D I think it's the first non-mine icon I used, besides specific gifts from people.)

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pieces December 27 2004, 12:23:49 UTC
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HAHAH. My keyboard mashing at you even though I already talked to you over the phone about it. HOLY CRAP WOMAN.

GUH. Like....I can't even comment properly like Niki can. BRILLIANT. JUST FOOKING BRILLIANT.

+_____+

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keikazama January 4 2005, 00:54:34 UTC
I love the last two lines. The mood was kept throughout the whole fic <3
just as Miss.Booshoo has mentioned, this fic does shake our nostalgic senses!

personally, I believe this is something you should post on the keiryo community *grins*

thanks for sharing such a wonderful fic!!
*waves happily*

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hikarix3 January 20 2005, 20:39:19 UTC
gaahh.. a beautifully written KeiRyo ;_______; Gaaah, very very nostalgic!!! XD I LOVE IT. *this is the first KeiRyo i've ever read in my life*

*-* I feel like i'm warming up to this couple now~

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blackroseasylum March 13 2005, 20:24:43 UTC
<3333 This fic is so much love. I don't even know where to start, so I won't. XD;;;

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