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[bekkalynn]

Title: Late Night
Fandom: wFL
Rating: PG
Characters People: FLAME (Kyohei, Yusuke, Hisato, Yuu)
Crosspost: I might post it to flamefans and/or kyoyusu eventually.
Wordcount: 755
Notes: For totchi_no_miko for her birthday. <3 It's very... erh, different. Thank you to those people I forced to look at it who tried to make it presentable, but I'm afraid the fact that it's

Comments

[summertea]

1) I am loving the style. Play with it a little more, and I think it'd be gorgeous when it's more refined. ♥
2) BECS I'M GOING TO GO CRY NOW.
3) This style works superbly with this fic. <3<3 The second half absolutely hits you.

[bekkalynn]

1) Really? T_T I'm so glad. It's fun to wrok with, but I was afraid people would think it was too weird. But I hope to get really good at it eventually. ^^

2) I'M SORRY. >.< Uh. It really wasn't supposed to be sad or anything. I meant it to be happy fluff. It just, uh, did it's own thing.

3) Thank you <3333 I think it got easier to write as I went along, because I didn't actually know where I was going when I started writing. X3

[lelola]

That was so sweet and perfect and shiny~! HANYAAAAAAAN~! ^________^

This writing style is so refreshing. It's rare to see it used so well. You captured so much. I am in awe!

Yuu pokes him in the side and he's back to watching the watching but now Yusuke knows he's watching and now Yusuke grins like he's so much older, grins around Hisato's spoon and there's Yuu's fingers in his hair saying soon, don't worry, soon.
This line made me want to order flowers to arrive at your door. ♥

And please post it to the comms. It deserves to read~! ^_____^

[bekkalynn]

Awwww, thank you! <3333 I'm so glad you liked it. ^_^ FLAME needs more love.

I think I really like this style. It's really fun, but it needs a lot of refinement. *grins* Am happy that it worked well.

*grins* You and your Yuu/Kyohei. XD (But thank you again, and I gladly accept all gifts and donations. ~_^)

Perhaps I shall. :D

[totchi_no_miko]

Oh... that was just so... ;-; I was laughing and crying and I loved it so much! Thank you!!! *huggles Becs to death* You're so wonderful to me!!! <333333 I'm going to print and carry it with me everywhere! *____*

[hikarix3]

OMGGG ;.; THATS SO BEAUTIFUL<3 reminds me of a fairytale ^^~ >DD Look at all the fluffy hisayuu moments <333

^^ I like the way you wrote it too <3 tooo cuuuteeee *_*

[booshoo]

Fangirled at you already but EGADS. <3333 F;LAKSDHG;LAKSDFJ

So in love with this, although it hurts unbelievably.