Control (1/?)

[bekahbabe06]

Title: Control
Fandom: NCIS
Characters: Abby/Ziva
Spoilers: none
Summary:   Control.  It's what they have in common.
Rating: M
Disclaimer: These characters belong to Donald P. Bellisario, Bellisarius Productions, CBS, Paramount, etc. No copyright infringement intended.
Author's Note: Please feed the bard!  I welcome any and all constructive criticism,

Comments

[cirroco_desade]

Heh. *cough* hmmm. Nice kiss.
Next part please?

[bekahbabe06]

Wait, so is that a good cough or a bad cough? ;-)

[cirroco_desade]

It was a droolably interesting, my gawd that's hot, oh no I need to concentrate at work cough.

[bekahbabe06]

Speaking of 'droolably interesting,' that is one HAWT icon!

Yeah, so um, this story is my attempt at smuttasticness... kinky fun ahead.

[voodoochild_101]

Nice start. I love how Ziva just knew someone was on their way down ;)

[rtarara]

Very nice beginning. I look forward to reading the next part ;)

[demoka]

hehe, ah Ziva. yes, you do have a way with Abby. XP aw, i thought they were gonna get it on in the lab! but then again, they might break something!

great fic! it's quite wonderfully descriptive! yay for "discussions"!

[torpedo_x]

Great start! =)
Ziva feels she's given Abby enough time to stew? Time to get what she wants. lol
Loved the kiss in the lab, very hot.