fic: good enough

[beingfacetious]

“Amelia Jessica Pond! We have got to go now!”

Amelia barely has time to set down her dolls, much less to hide in the closet, before Aunt Sharon stomps into the bedroom. The stormy look on her aunt’s face would make any normal nine-year-old girl cower and quickly comply. Amelia is no normal nine-year-old girl.

“I’m not ready, and my shoes have

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[professor_spork]

“I’m not ready, and my shoes have gone,” she announces, wiggling her bare toes to prove her point. “I think you’ll have to go without me.”
AWWWWWWH!! omgiloveher.

Aunt Sharon peers into the closet, then crosses to the open window and looks down. “It is truly startling how often my petunias end up looking like your loafers, Amelia,” she comments sharply, turning to face her niece and crossing her arms.
BAHAHAHAHA. I am already so in love with this fic.

“I’m Rory,” he says, extending a hand, “and I like your hair.”
HEE. Boys are so... simple. <333

“Dad’s room is upstairs, I’ll just go check, I’ll be right back,” he says, turning away from the girl.
“No!” Rory stops so quickly that Amelia runs right into him and they almost fall. He is about to ask if she’s okay when she lurches to catch his arm and rushes on, “I mean, can’t I just…can I come with you?”
*wibbles* Ohhhhhhhh, Amy.

she is afraid of words like “dating” and “boyfriend,” but also that he was her first kiss (and her only second kiss).
Yes. This. Perfect.

“Come back,” he

[beingfacetious]

This comment makes me go like this: :D :D :D :D :D

I looooved writing them as kids. Extra yay if it came out well! Ha. Also eeeeee I'm so happy you liked the end part! I was a bit proud of it. :)

Thanks for all the kindness friend! ♥

[rumpelsnorcack]

I have no words for how lovely this is. Your Rory is just adorable and oh so devoted and Amy, poor Amy, with her shoes and uncertainties and “Rory, I was talking to you, you idiot.” is just so perfect. I think Rory Williams might just be perfect for the brilliant Amy Pond.

[beingfacetious]

Thank you so much! I know you've done a lot of lovely meta about these two so I'm glad my interpretation was met with approval :)

[rumpelsnorcack]

Aww, gee now you're making me blush. But this seriously was wonderful -- they are so cute and both of them are strong and yet vulnerable and it really is just gorgeous how you wrote them together.

[paynesgrey]

This is so sweet and adorable. Loved it! Fantastic work.

[beingfacetious]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

[miracleofmercy]

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[beingfacetious]

Right back at you friiiiend :-D

[reneerose242000]

Like this bit a lot------“Actually, I think…I think I want to be just Rory today.” He clenches his hands into fists and holds his breath as he waits for her to react. She will be disappointed in him, he is sure, and probably also quite angry, in which case it’s a good thing he’s still standing by the door. This is the first time in three years that he has ever refused to be the Raggedy Doctor, though he has considered it several times before now. He is never sure whether it’s really him she wants to be playing with, really him she gets excited to hear on the stairs every day, and earlier this morning he decided it was high time he found out. Now he finds himself desperately hoping it won’t prove to be a mistake."

Sweet story!

[beingfacetious]

I'm so glad you liked that part! I enjoyed writing Rory :) Thanks for the kind words!