Comments | beingcricket: Short Story #1

beingcricket

Short Story #1 - "Flight"

Jun 28, 2010 09:31

This is a short story I've been working on in my head for months now. Just wrote it with no real thought of editing, so please keep that in mind. Enjoy! :)

( Flight )

stories, writing, fear, flight

Comments 6

btw... beingcricket June 28 2010, 14:14:43 UTC

No, I don't share the fear of the main character. I actually LOVE flying. :)

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beingcricket June 29 2010, 16:19:33 UTC

Thank you! :)

themaillady June 28 2010, 21:59:18 UTC

Wow, that was awesome!!!!!

beingcricket June 29 2010, 16:19:50 UTC

Yay! Thanks! :)

lorettamom June 29 2010, 03:08:22 UTC

pantpantpant..... I can't catch my breath!! Wow!!!!!!!!!! You captured the absolute terror and belief in the certainty of death and horror that every terrified flier feels. Whether they admit it or not, EVERYONE has imagined this, or a similar, scenario, during some (or every!) flight. Some dismiss it, some just live through it every time. Cristy, SERIOUSLY.... you need to turn in some of your writing to Someone, Someplace. Wow......

beingcricket June 29 2010, 16:21:16 UTC

Aww, thank you, Mom! You know, I really don't have a clue where I'd send anything, but I do have fun doing it. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) Love ya'!