Fic: Brainwaves part 2

[flarn_fanfic]

Title: Brainwaves (part 2)

Author: Flarn

Disclaimer: Not mine, I just want to play with it.

Pairings: Sam/Bee, Sam/Mikaela

Warnings: Don't drink gasoline, it's for giant robots, mmmkay?

This part features Optimus and Ratchet as well as Sam and Bee.

(In the back of his mind, Sam marveled at the horrifying sounds he was producing, like a sump

Comments

[sprencenspire]

neat :) Thanks for another great chapter. I love it. can't wait to find out more!

[flarn_fanfic]

More will be found out, though I am not sure if anyone is going to be happy at the speed information will be divulged. ;)

[shockd]

In the back of his mind, Sam marveled at the horrifying sounds he was producing, like a sump pump trying to backwash concrete. - GOLD. :D

You had some fantastic imagery in here, LOL-type stuff. "...a cross between iced tea and french onion soup..." That... that sounds good. Is that weird? O_o

[flarn_fanfic]

I always sort of liked the smell of gasoline, not that I ever went around sniffing it or anything, but when we pulled into a gas station to fill up I never really minded. Perhaps because it smells a bit like sulfur, and sulfur is one of the ingredients that makes onions (which I love) so pungent, so I drew those comparisons to try to make it comprehensible for humans why Sam would drink something that would be poisonous to him in his human incarnation.

Also, I seem to remember commercials for gas stations where they show people pumping gas, and the gas is filling the tank, and it's all sloshy and golden, and they make it look so wholesome...

Glad to know I seem to have made you understand the whole vibe too. :)

[shockd]

I never minded the smell of gasoline either; I was always confused when my mom would complain about it. Huh.

I was unaware that sulfur making onions pungent. The More You Know. :)

I look forward to the next chapter!! (Like WHOA)

[flarn_fanfic]

All answers will be made clear in time, don't worry. :)

[neku]

this is fucking gold.....that first chapter ..O.M.G.. was just UGH ... * NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE MY UTTER LOVE* the 2nd is delicious <3 i want MOREEEEEEEEEEEEE

[flarn_fanfic]

Well, I've always thought that saying a picture is worth a thousand words is a gross understatement. Your fanart, and the works of others on this community have been worth at least, oh, 6000 words (and counting) so far. :)

Alas, I love fanart so much, but drawing is just not my forte. The fun I have writing makes up for it though.

[bionic]

ahhhhh! LOVE THIS! Can't wait for the next part! Just, EVERYTHING. So cool. What a great idea, and you make it all so plausible. More plz!

[flarn_fanfic]

I am glad what I have done doesn't seem so ridiculous, considering I am being evil and deliberately withholding information from you readers right along with poor Sam.

More is coming. :)