Sparks, the sequel

[yuuzaiden]

I've finally started on the sequel to Sparks, Flames.
I've managed to finish up the first chapter and I was wondering if anyonw would be willing to read it over for me.
It's been betaed and I would like some outside observation.
if you're willing to simply let me know.
Thanks in advance.

Comments

[camfield]

I'd love to, if you don't mind. :)

[yuuzaiden]

I don't mind at all.
Would you prefer me to send it as an email or in a pm?

[camfield]

Email is fine. I sent you a PM.