Comments | beexsam: Fic: Hide Like Steel, Heart Like Stuffing (Thunderstreak's Adventures Ch 6)

shamrockivy in beexsam

Fic: Hide Like Steel, Heart Like Stuffing (Thunderstreak's Adventures Ch 6)

Oct 30, 2009 21:23

And now here is chapter 6 folks. Also, if it's not too much trouble, could those who've read the latest smut in chapter 3.5 of my story tell me if they thought it was good/okay? It was my second time attempting to write anything over PG-13, so I'd love some feedback on how I did. -coughImightdomorecough-

Happy Early Halloween!

Title: Hide Like Steel ( Read more... )

poster: shamrockivy, fanfic, pg, ratchet, ironhide, mpreg, sam/bee, fanfiction

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ryu433 October 31 2009, 03:59:56 UTC

you brot Jazz back. cool. your chapter 3.5 is great.

shamrockivy October 31 2009, 21:21:34 UTC

Thanks for the reassurance! And yes, I couldn't help but bring Jazz back to life.

kuronyo October 31 2009, 15:32:07 UTC

Awwww how sweet. :)

You've got gruff and tough Ironhide down pat.

shamrockivy October 31 2009, 21:23:20 UTC

I always like thinking of Ironhide as the crass but yet dependable mech. He's usually portrayed as being rough around the edges, but his actions have good intentions.

It makes him loads of fun to write.

joyfullscroll November 5 2009, 18:28:27 UTC

You captured Ironhide PERFECTLY! (Even his more than tactful way of avoiding Futre Pain by Ratchet AND Optimus of his opinion of Bee's and Sam's Sparkbonding)

I LOVE the fact you brought Jazz back! He's a much needed relief just as Optimus is.

Love how you keep the series going as well! Thanks for all the work you do for here! *HUGS*

PS: Will you do a 'Poster' of your name here? So it will be easier down the line to find all your series under your name instead of going through pages and pages back to find them.

shamrockivy November 6 2009, 20:12:48 UTC

I would LOVE to do a 'poster' tag, I just don't know exactly how to do so. If you know, please send me a message of how to do it, and I'll gladly get to work on that.

Jazz is going to sneak his way into some more chapters hopefully. He was too fun for me to leave dead, especially since I had Sam bring Ravage back online.

joyfullscroll November 10 2009, 19:47:02 UTC

Ok... I believe on doing the 'Poster' part is when you do a Subject part just write POSTER and your name? If that doesn't work... I'll ask one of the others who HAVE! I'm determined you have a poster! When your series is done I want to re-read them! *laughs*

joyfullscroll November 10 2009, 19:48:09 UTC

Sorry... NOT Subject! But under 'Tags'! lol

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