Fic: Seashells

Nov 07, 2007 02:22

Title: Seashells
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Transformers and all related characters therein do not belong to me. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: No matter how hard Bumblebee has tried, he cannot hear the ocean. Established relationship.

Author’s Note: Just a little ficlet that would not leave me alone. Enjoy!

I send thee a shell )

ficlet, poster: lady_oneiros, bumblebee, sam/bee, sam

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sister_dear November 7 2007, 07:40:50 UTC
This was a lovely little fic. I loved all the technical language Bumblebee uses in reference to simple seashells, and that turn around at the end brought the sentiment of Cybertron as Bee's home in perfectly, when Sam and Bee finally share something, and it's not quite the same thing but the feeling they're both experiencing is pretty much identical. <3

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lady_oneiros November 11 2007, 00:38:49 UTC
Thank you very much! I'll tell you, being a science major helps me write from Bumblebee's point of view--he may not be as bad as some Autobots, but I think he would definitely look at things in as complicated way as he could ^_^ Thanks again.

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perfect_cyanide November 7 2007, 07:53:59 UTC
I love this fic. It's so beautiful.

It made me smile.

I hope more little fics continue to bother you until you write them!

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lady_oneiros November 11 2007, 00:39:28 UTC
Thank you! :D And I wouldn't worry. Little fics tend to follow me like fruit flies--they just won't go away, and they love my computer screen. ~_^

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littlepunkryo November 7 2007, 07:58:23 UTC
This is so wonderful!!!! I'm gonna go and read it again.

♥♥♥

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lady_oneiros November 11 2007, 00:39:44 UTC
Thank ya! I hope it's as good the second time. ^_^

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snowflakespeech November 7 2007, 08:18:31 UTC
Awww. That was so lovely...As soon as I read the bit where Sam labeled the shell 'Bumblebee' I immediately had this image in my head of sometime later, Bee feeling homesick or lonely or something and him (in holoform obviously) sitting at the lookout, listening to the shell and Ironhide or Optimus or Ratchet or even all three finding him there and wondering what he was doing...But I digress...that was really...just wow. Great job!

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lady_oneiros November 11 2007, 00:40:27 UTC
Thank you! If I thought I could write a tiny little epilogue to it, I would, but Ratchet's a tough nut to crack. He'll only talk under special circumstances. *kicks him* I'm glad you liked it!

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kyme November 7 2007, 13:53:24 UTC
....awww.. such a sweet fic... It's so.. nostalgic-y. You should write about bee making ratchet listen to the shell or something. Lol.

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lady_oneiros November 11 2007, 00:41:05 UTC
Thanks! I would love to write an addendum with Ratchet, but he excels at being uncooperative. If I can coax him into it, maybe I can write a short addition. Thanks again!

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