[Fic] Seven Days -- Part 6a/7: (Saturday Evening) Safety Dance

Oct 25, 2007 23:39

Title: Seven Days -- Part 6a/7: (Saturday Evening) Safety Dance
Author: Lyricality (lyricality)
Rating: M/NC-17 overall for graphic sparksex. This part, PG-13 or so.
Pairings: Eventual Bee/everyone. No real pairings in this part. ...Yet.
Disclaimer: Hasbro owns it. Along with my SOUL. All characters are of legal age.
Note/Summary: Blame the kink meme ( Read more... )

fanfic, rated-m, rated: nc-17, optimus prime

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iluquinga October 26 2007, 10:15:41 UTC
OMG, I just had the weirdest premonition that I should check this fic for updates right now, and lo and behold you wrote morrrrrreee!! :D

Absolutely love the conversation between Mirage and Optimus. You've managed to craft their characterizations so beautifully, and also given us lots to think about.

(Also, Mirage/Optimus? Bring it! (Please?))

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lyricality October 29 2007, 03:43:27 UTC
...Your icon is my favorite.

Thank you so much. ♥ I wanted to try a deeper look into Mirage, and writing from his perspective was an intriguing challenge.

(Yes'm. *salute*)

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okami_myrrhibis October 26 2007, 13:01:12 UTC
Glad to see an update - I was hoping to see one before the weekend.

Perhaps we shall hear more on Elita's fate? And I hope Jack's OK.

And let me 2nd some Mirage/Optimus!! :)

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keelywolfe October 26 2007, 15:05:52 UTC
This is such a fantastic story, I'm always so happy to see you update! I love the way you write Mirage; he wasn't the only one getting shivers when Optimus touched him. Such a fantastic scene!

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lyricality October 29 2007, 03:45:40 UTC
I'm ridiculously pleased to know you're enjoying my work, given how much enjoyment I get from the 'Human' series.

...Honestly, I get shivers when I think about Optimus touching anyone. His hands are (probably obviously) my very peculiar kink. ^^;

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saria_vo October 26 2007, 18:06:19 UTC
holyshitholyshitholyshit. Conversation that's better than pr0n? Only you. Really loaded conversation, lots of emotion, tension. Tenderness, too. I love Mirage. He always seemed a melancholy character, always longing for home.

"We went out with the trash."

Millennium Falcon FTW! ESB, one of the greatest movies ever made. I have peach pie in the oven for you ♥

Can't think of anything else to say at this moment. I have to read a few more times, print it out. I see more when it's on paper for whatever freaky reason. ::rummages for 3 hole punch:: I feel doofy, but I always have more to say so long after the fact. Owell.

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lyricality October 29 2007, 03:48:06 UTC
Conversation that's better than pr0n?

...I'm going to tackleglomp you now. You appreciate subtlety, you print my work out to read again, and you're baking me a pie. My love can only be expressed in emoticons.

<3 Less than threeee.

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floofwolfe October 26 2007, 22:23:39 UTC
Those two do fit rather well together....I wonder if Jazz is gonna get any non-Bee lurv by the end of this. He seems a bit emotionally unbalanced - a bit raw and edgy, yanno?

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