Fic: That Still Small Voice: Chapter Five

[lady_oneiros]

Title: That Still Small Voice
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Transformers and all related characters therein do not belong to me. No copyright infringement is intended.

Summary: Sam has been pulled deeper into the conflict than anyone realized.

Author’s Note: Sorry for the shortness of the chapter…I just could not drag it out any further! Also, this

Comments

[mmouse15]

A month. You've made us wait a whole month!

Well, it was worth the wait. I love the interaction between Wheeljack and Ratchet. I love way Bee reacted to Mikaela showing up.

This is a great read...keep up the good work!

And thanks for sharing.

[lady_oneiros]

Augh! I'm sorry! I didn't meant to make everyone wait that long!

I'm really glad you liked it, though. ^_^ I had a lot of fun writing that scene between Ratchet and Wheeljack--it just came out naturally, which I'm taking to be a good sign. Usually, I must drag the words out kicking and screaming and biting. And yes, I finally got some beexsam in there....but it's so slow. I keep telling the characters to make out, but all they want to do is talk and "take things slow." Jerks.

Thanks for reading! XD

[twins_eternal]

Yay!!! An update!!!
loooove this chapter

just noticed this though:
Logically, it would follow that more Autobots would mean more Decepticons, since both Bumblebee and Optimus had made it quite clear that the war was from over.
Do you mean:
Logically, it would follow that more Autobots would mean more Decepticons, since both Bumblebee and Optimus had made it quite clear that the war was far from over.

[lady_oneiros]

Ack! *goes to fix that and a few other errors I spotted* Thanks! No matter how many times I "proofread" this before I post it, I always miss at least 2-3 things.

I'm really happy that you liked it! XD Thanks verra much!

[lady_oneiros]

Ack! So sorry for the late response. Forgive!

Thank you very much for reading--I'm glad you liked it! ^_^ Yeah...the relationship between Bee and Sam is coming a bit slowly, but they just won't listen to me when I tell them to go ahead and make out.

I loved writing Wheeljack...I'm not sure of how accurately I know his character, but I look forward to working with him more. Thanks again!

[robin99]

YAY for a new chapter! :D

[lady_oneiros]

XD Glad you liked it! I'll try and have the next one up soon!

[lemonflav_lopfe]

This is fantastic and awesome. The wait did nothing but increase my hunger for more, and double my enjoyment of what you offered.

And have I mentioned how much I love your Wheeljack?

Like, love-love. BIG love.

[lady_oneiros]

Thank ya very much! XD I'm really glad you enjoyed reading, and I'm glad you liked Wheeljack. He's fun to work with. ^_^