Why, yes. This chapter is awful. But I'm sick of fighting with it and wish to move on to the rest of the story. However, if any of you have any ideas on how to improve it, please let me know. If I can revise it to my satisfaction, I will repost it later. Also, much thanks to
lawrencered for giving me some feedback on this chapter
Title: That Still Small
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FTW!
I'm getting scared for Sam.
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I completely love the integration of many different facets of language into this piece - poetry, nursery rhymes, even our lateral logic - which combined with giant alien robots and spark possession (if that's what it is) make a very interesting read.
I've been hooked by this story since you started posting it, and each chapter brings me closer and closer to madness as it taunts me with its obscured plot. What in the holy blazes is going on with Megatron? Have we got some 'eternal spark' issues like with Starscream? Or... gah...
Keep writing, wonderful person, you.
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Should make for some interesting explosions.
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