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[Fic] Seven Days -- Part 4/7: (Thursday) Horizontal Jazz

Sep 09, 2007 22:57

Title: Seven Days -- Part 4/7: (Thursday) Horizontal Jazz
Author: Lyricality (lyricality)
Rating: M/NC-17 for graphic sparksex
Pairings: Eventual Bee/everyone. In this part, Jazz/Bee with some Sam/Bee.
Disclaimer: The G1 repaint Starscream movie toy belongs to me. The rest of Transformers does not. All characters are of legal age.
Note/Summary: So late. ( Read more... )

jazz, fanfic, rated-m, ratchet, spark sex, sam/bee, rated: nc-17

Comments 29

lawrencered September 10 2007, 13:43:50 UTC

I was completely waffling over whether to read this series. Even though I've probably read your entire fanfictional output and been consistently blown away, the premise made me cringe XD. pleasurebots. haha. But the lure of your writing was too much to resist. And somehow you've pulled off the cheesy porntastic prompt and titles and still made it in-character, touching, and believeable (and the anticipation of beexsam happy ending ajskdl;). I love you huge insane amounts and want to be your neighbor so I can make you pie. Would you settle for fanarts?

lyricality September 11 2007, 19:25:00 UTC

Omg PIE and FANARTS. Um yes, I think I could be persuaded to settle for either one, actually.

I'm glad I've won you over. =) Part of the challenge here was to see how much plot could be made out of what was essentially an excuse for robot sex, heh. I would be more ashamed of myself, but Bee won't let me.

ravynstoneabbey September 10 2007, 14:55:13 UTC

*loves this series so very much* I squealed when it popped up on my flist. :)

Jazz and Bee are so very lovely. Ratchet is the grumpy doctor with a very well hidden soft spot.

I noticed something: Bee is supposed to be giving comfort, but all of the others have given him comfort as well. Nice!

Sam's brain is going to be very broken for a while, I think.

lyricality September 11 2007, 19:27:10 UTC

I think part of the evidence for how very good Bee is at his job is the willingness of the others to offer him comfort in return. ^_^ *goes all sappy*

Sam's sense of reality is about to undergo a slight inversion, methinks.

ravynstoneabbey September 12 2007, 01:57:54 UTC

More so, than there are giant robots from outer space who transform into really cool cars?

Jazz and Bee are so much love together.

(psst. Posted links to this on my TF fic recs page. I hope you don't mind?)

ravynstoneabbey December 30 2007, 16:57:02 UTC

I Think Your

sakon76 September 11 2007, 01:43:47 UTC

Knew these organics had courage. Didn’t know they could care like us, ’til I heard more a’ their music.

...You know, that may just be the single best example of getting inside a Cybertronian's head/writing from their viewpoint that I have ever had the pleasure to witness.

lyricality September 11 2007, 19:28:42 UTC

Wow, thank you. I usually think I have the opposite problem--that my Cybertronians are much too human in their actions and emotions--so that's particularly good to hear.

...*spontaneous hugs*

295_39 September 11 2007, 01:54:22 UTC

I keep getting completely awed by the amount of emotion you can show in these stories.
And I love your characterization of Jazz.

lyricality September 11 2007, 19:34:01 UTC

I think this is my favorite comment, because Jazz did not come to me as easily as the others--the real reason this chapter is so ridiculously late--and I worried over his characterization to an obsessive amount during editing. I'm so glad to know he rang true, since he's one of my favorite G1 characters. My biggest concern was that he might seem too flippant, after essentially just returning from the dead, and I tried to bring across the feeling that the experience did disturb him, but didn't destroy him.

Jazz: Too good ta be put off by a lil' thing like destruction. *grin*

295_39 September 11 2007, 20:32:07 UTC

Well, if he were to start angsting and whatnot, he just wouldn't be Jazz.

lola_hard September 11 2007, 17:02:21 UTC

Wonderful chapter, just as the three previous! Finally Sam&Bee's dilemma is starting to get solved. And Jaaaaaazzy ^_^ *sigh* What an autobot, really :D I'm glad you liked my variant of a title. It really did fit :)
I'm waiting for the 5th day. Impatiently ;)

lyricality September 11 2007, 19:38:05 UTC

Your title suggestion was excellent! All I had by the end of Part Three was "All that Jazz," of which I really wasn't particularly fond. I also considered "Jazz Fusion," but that didn't seem nearly porntastic enough.

Massive ♥ for you. ^__^

lola_hard September 11 2007, 19:51:58 UTC

Oh, ♥ for you as well! ^_^ *big HUG*
I could try and come up with something sweet-nasty for upcoming chapters of your story, but we've suddenly run out of (movie-canon) autobots. *scratches her head thoughtfully* And I suspect you won't be able to tell the next pairing without giving out spoilers :D But, honestly, it's not about titles, I appreciate what goes after them much more. Yeah :)