Fic! Again.

[snap_chopstick]

Title: Too Bright the Soul that Shines
Author: Snapped Chopstick (snap_chopstick)
Rating: K+/PG (One day I will write you guys robot!sex... I swear!)
Pairings: What comm is this again? The Bee/Sam one, right?
Warnings: Read Across the Fading Sky first, as this is a direct sequel.

Comments

[keitsu]

just to point out an error...

Megatron finally broke the silence. "It was your contact with the other Allspark as it was destroyed that connected you to this one."

... wtf is megatron doing... alive? LOL you meant optimus, didn't you? XD huhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

seriously had a wtf moment when i read that.

great job, whohooooooooooo

i always thought why did the allspark create mass-killing destructive robots all the time when used :D

[keitsu]

oh, saw the changes. :D

[shockd]

Yes, a happy ending! And it was so sweetly done, too. The lengths Sam would of had to go through, and just to be with Bumblebee. *tear* Beautiful... ♥

[sprencenspire]

YAY :) a happy ending - and a good concept too :) I wondered about the allspark - since all it seemed to do was create evil robots.

Mind you if one moment I was a mobile phone and then woke up in a glass box with a bunch of people staring in at me I'd probably be pissed too :D

[neku]

oh i think everybody seems to not recall when simmons spoke about megatron being the .."dad" to all computer chips and stuff :< ...@_@ some how maybe getting all the blueprints for modern computer chip technology from a deceptecon seems reasonable enough reason why all the machines given life by the all spark on earth turn violent as hell....

actually in fact i think going deeper into TF history , both autobots and deceptecons created the body's of new transformers and they took them to vector sigma in order for the allspark/ to breath life into them.. or something of that sort ..:D

[neku]

;0; ! <3 so beautiful ...soooo beautiful...im glad both had a happy ending...;_;

[jsherlock]

YAY! Happy Ending! Very good, I enjoyed reading these very much.